Reviews for The Lost NeverRose
Julia chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
I love this story. It is different from all the other Hook stories. I have one question about the story, why does Charlotte steal the money? Is it because she needs it to leave Neverland? I wish you could continue the story. It would be great. Update soon
kittyhawk09 chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Very interesting. Is this story going to be that different from the movie? Keep writing.
Lycan Queen chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
This is the first decent OC story for Hook

Most of the few OCs that are here are Peter Pan's daughter or were transported through a movie

I love your writing style, description and vocabulary

And you actually check for typos

Even though we don't see much of the movie characters yet not a hint of OOCness

That's another thing your taking your time instead of having her meet a love interest in the first two chapters like the others

It's realistically mature and your my favorite kind of author

Originality oh how I've missed you old friend

You my friend have been long overdue most of this entire archive has been an amateur act

And that's really disappointing considering I love this movie

The authors here are like a middle school chorus and you are Barbra Streisand (Forgive my analogy)
Kat chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
This looks like it could be really interesting and original, I like your writing style. I am surprised there are not more reviews for this fic. More please :)
Padme4000 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I really liked reading this and would love to read more