Reviews for The End
WaveMoon chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Ot s really well written. So beutiful and so... so sad...
BlackFyre94 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
*gasp* ah! You killed Alex! Aww...

Did like the short sentences - kept it moving nicely and stopped the fic getting bogged down in loads of detail. Nice job! :) BlackFyre x
emmadactryl chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Short, sweet... Well, maybe "sweet" isn't the right word... Well written, then :) Short, well written and good on you for killing Alex; he's kicked the bucket a couple of times at our rather morbid hands. I hope you stick around and continue with your other fic as well.
be-nice-to-nerds chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
I quite like this.

I loved how it's written in quite short sentences, almost like a poem.

And the last line is epic.

But is it just me or does this sound (read, whatever) quite similar to my version of this challenge?

Oh well, this is still good

Keep on writing