|Reviews for Conceding Defeat|
| duchesscarml chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Much, much kudos for this! Lol. Completely in character, too! I LIKED Bella in this... That's never happened. Ever.
| Deadblood-shiki chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
like bella's personality in one, a million times better then canon's bella in my opinion.
| kamimimi chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
I like Twilight better this way XD
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| pornographic february chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
your bella- flawless. your edward and jacob were perfectly in character. i laughed the whole time and the ending made me feel fuzzy.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
| JaymesEvenings chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I loved that :3
| ohbeautifulremorse chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
this story was so cute :)
| Sophia Isobel Theoreux chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
hahaha... god that was funny! Edward and Jacob huh.. never thought of it at all.. nice!
| Katt Jeane chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Well if this doesn't make you wriggle, I don't know what will. PLEASE RE-WRITE TWILIGHT! I'M BEGGING YOU! D: I love this SOOOOOO much more than the original book! XD
| Dreaming Maya chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Jakeward makes you wriggle? Lol, I haven't heard that one before.
But then again, Edward's as straight as a bendy ruler, so hey, anything's possible.
I thought he was as straight as a sparkly hair tie, personally.
| 8MercuryHg0 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
...I can't find anything wrong with your story. The plot is great: the whole Jacob immediately seeing Edward as a hot piece of ass, and then, they really fall for each other; your writing style's unique and definitely works, with the way you skip from important scenario to important situation but still in chronological order, not to mention that even the more mundane conversations really show how their relationship and friendship develop, and god! I mean, they're all conversations! Writing a story like that is difficult enough by itself, but you even have all correct grammar! as far as I can see anyway. Ah, I think I idolize you as of right now. Okay, sorry, I just think you really deserved a complimentary review.
| 18animeyaoi chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
made me giggle
| Animeyaoimaster chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
| tina chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
i like it... you used their former personalities in an amazing way!
| Chimeria chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
This made me laugh! I loved how you just took all the ridiculous drama and seriousness out of the Twilight-verse and created new personalities for all of them. It surprised me at first, the complete changing of their behavior, but thinking about it - that happens in almost every ff. So whatever! I liked it really much because it was something new, which is very difficult to achieve with the billions of Twilight-fanfictions here!
Other than that, I read your profile and am impressed - You don't hold back who you are and have no problem fighting for your opinion on the topic. I find that refreshing, and I am very much supporting you on it. Love is wonderful, no matter who you share it with.
So keep it up! You are someone to look up to for all those out there that are hated for who they are. (By some, at least, hope you know what I mean.)