|Reviews for Conceding Defeat|
| Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 9/10
Hmm I wonder who is on top.
| S chapter 1 . 1/11
This was soooo cute! I like that you actually made me like Bella. Her relationship with Jacob was everything I had hoped it would've been. Awesome work!
| diamond girl loves diamonds chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
brilliant well done. maybe a sequel?
| EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
This was really cute and very freaking humorous. I couldn't stop laughing! XD Also, I hate Bella. The reason I'm mentioning that is because you actually wrote Bella in a way that makes her a pretty good character instead of insufferably horrible one. If she was really like this, let's just say I actually wouldn't hate her.
| Juliakaze26 chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Loved it...the friends relationship was so sweet
| duchesscarml chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Much, much kudos for this! Lol. Completely in character, too! I LIKED Bella in this... That's never happened. Ever.
| Deadblood-shiki chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
like bella's personality in one, a million times better then canon's bella in my opinion.
| kamimimi chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
I like Twilight better this way XD
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| pennywhistles chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
your bella- flawless. your edward and jacob were perfectly in character. i laughed the whole time and the ending made me feel fuzzy.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
| 1313131313131 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I loved that :3
| ohbeautifulremorse chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
this story was so cute :)
| Will.Hell.Minna.-Sophia Isobel chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
hahaha... god that was funny! Edward and Jacob huh.. never thought of it at all.. nice!
| Katt Jeane chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Well if this doesn't make you wriggle, I don't know what will. PLEASE RE-WRITE TWILIGHT! I'M BEGGING YOU! D: I love this SOOOOOO much more than the original book! XD
| Dreaming Maya chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Jakeward makes you wriggle? Lol, I haven't heard that one before.
But then again, Edward's as straight as a bendy ruler, so hey, anything's possible.
I thought he was as straight as a sparkly hair tie, personally.