|Reviews for Hebi|
| Auzurite chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
HMM! All i can really say to this is interesting...
It's the only thought that comes to my mind. Though your writing style is amazing, for i am able to feel the emotions through your words.
Although i simply can not say that the story itslef was amazing though i believe it was, my thoughts could only perceive interesting.
Well now you're probably confused as am i but it is what i feel as i read your story. Although maybe my brain can't fully comprehend what exactly was the story that you had intended to tell.
Please do not misunderstand, this isn't a negative review for i did in fact enjoy it.