Reviews for Sparda no Tsukune
god of all chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
tsukune sparda
Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
No doubt that Inner Moka would have no problem accepting him as a lover considering his power. And the same can be said for her father.
Mageman gx chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Please updated soon, i love the look of this story and wish to read more!
tripod762 chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
I wonder how this will play out. Tsukune as a half demon; an interesting starting point. Whilst I accept that this was a short prologue, the defining points of Tsukune’s character seem to be revenge and duty; very different from the original.
BloodyFrost chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Well, I will say that I wish it was a bit more detailed to make it longer. Maybe even something that will grasp the readers attention and make them excited for the next chapter. Seeing that it's just a prologue I guess I shouldn't push it.

You do have a pretty good plot set up though, so hopefully your next chapters are a little longer and detailed for us readers. I do hope they come out well.
Akytsu Frozen chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
well the plot its interesting up date soon mi recomendation is to put two oc for kurumu and mizore jajaja se ya later