Reviews for Repercussions of an Unwilling Vanguard
grimm chapter 4 . 11/16
ok I like how not everyone is a ron in this story, but it kind of irritates me that they all see him as a fragile piece of lint or something to be put in a pocket and protected at all times... he is 14 years old and has been through more in his life then any of them, Im sure he is much more than capable of taking care of himself then any of them are- especially when it comes to bullies trying to give him swirlys... sorry, thats just been bugging me since first chapter- they treat him like a damn three year old. have none of them thought of nutrient potions or something similar to get him healthier either? it is annoying reading small boy this- little boy- that...
grimmich chapter 3 . 11/16
(that is my actual user name I just cant log in at the moment...)
are there any Dom!harry/sub!Victor stories? I much prefer dom harry in anything slash that I read but your story is really interesting so far, which is honestly the only thing that has kept me reading so far, that is how much I generally don't like sub!harry, I think it just goes against everything in his personality...
grimmich chapter 1 . 11/16
if she is such a bitch and obviously treats him like shit- why is he still friends with her? even just reading his personal thoughts in the last half of this chapter I cant see why he stays with either of them. I would rather be alone than have friends like that, what is the saying, "who needs enemies with friends like these..." comes to mind.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/20
Hey! I'm sure you're not even looking at reviews anymore but I really like your work :) but just so you know, in french a speaker would never refer to themselves as just je without a verb the correct way to say me would be to just say moi. I hope you're still writing and doing well!
bleeb90 chapter 6 . 10/18
I loved this story!
EveJHoang chapter 6 . 9/4
I haven't noticed if you've even wrote "Drumstrang"...

Aaah, well. Yet another uncomplete, fantastic story...
EveJHoang chapter 5 . 9/4
Mehehehehe, so cute 8D
EveJHoang chapter 4 . 9/4
Seamus and Dean are lovely :D
EveJHoang chapter 3 . 9/4
I like when Harry is called Bambi :D
EveJHoang chapter 2 . 9/4
Paranoid and cute. :D
EveJHoang chapter 1 . 9/4
Oh I wanna bitch-slap Hermiome so bad right now!

By the way, thank you for answering to my hysterical review yesterday, sorry if I freaked you out, I tend to be overwhelmed by my own emotions when I find something good, and a good story unfinished makes me feel like eating a superb fraisier only to discover they forgot the strawberries inside...

I really, really hope you will find it in yourself to update those stories, it made me happy to see an answer .
Ruglet2 chapter 6 . 7/30
You seem to have a habit for wee hours writing. It certainly isn't a bad thing if all of this goodness is what comes from it. I can't wait to see how this one evolves.
rebekah nicole chapter 6 . 7/11
Update please!
BabyGhost123 chapter 6 . 6/29
I would love if u could update this story as soon as u can...its a really good story and would love if u could go into more of what is happening with Draco and probably the relationship that would come about with the twins. And I would love to hear more about Viktor and Harry
emmalilly21 chapter 6 . 5/19
continue please
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