|Reviews for TCP: Strays|
| livinoutloud chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
| Popples chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
Not bad. Definate potential. Where are you taking it?
| aj's girl1 chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
Very interesting beginning. I hope you continue.
| SLWalker chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
First of all, lemme say that yes, it has a few grammar problems, and you might want to change the formatting so there's whitespace between your paragraphs.
That being said...
It's beautiful. You captured the road in ways that some authors only dream to do; the road dust and the feeling, and the sort of fifties flare that made this a genuine pleasure for me to read. I don't often offer this praise, but you made me feel like I was there, like I could breathe it and smell it. You wrote Remy and Paige with sympathy, but not pity, I loved Lucky, and I ached at points. But there was also a feeling of hope.
So, it's gorgeous. And it gets a place on my favorites.
| Tinne chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Good start, I'll be reading this story.
| ororoiqadi chapter 1 . 1/20/2002
*thumbs up* Your A/U rocks!