Reviews for A Beautiful Sight
RKOsgirl92 chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
awesome one shot!
Ctinaisfashion chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
loved it i hope you decide to make this more than a one shot
ctina chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
loved it i hope there is more maybe even some dirtiness
Sunny's Priceless Dream chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
MERRY EDGEMAS!

I LOVE IT ALREADY AND I'M ONLY ON THE AUTHOR'S NOTE

OUR STORE NEVER SHUTS DOWN BECAUSE IT'S THE ONLY ONE IN TOWN.

even though it is always empty

Seriously, my boss allows me to get on twitter at work because I'm lucky to get 5 customers in an 8 hours shift.

I WONDER WHO IS TRYING TO PULL THE DOOR OPEN?

"Oh, Jesus."

That better not be Theo. He would never say Jesus!

All she did was blink, mouth agape.

Haha that's totally me.

"Open up, Sunny, and close your mouth."

I'd like to close my mouth around Ted's...okay, sorry, i'm getting out of hand here.

"Uh, yeah, yep." That would be followed by "Do me, now!"

MISSISSIPPI! IT IS THEO.

I never had a doubt though!

"I need a work-out, anyway"

Oh fuck, I'd give him a workout like he's never had before.

"Go help him!"

Get his pants off? Okay!

Oh, just help with the shampoo. Damn.

HIS EYES WERE HEAVILY LIDDED?

OH EDGE JUST LET ME HAVE HIM IN THAT AISLE AGAINST THE SHELVES.

"Okay, I'll be in the front if you need me...on my knees waiting patiently for you."

YOU FORGOT TO ADD THAT PART MACK!

OH I KNOW WHAT'S UNDERNEATH HIS JEANS

HE HAD TWO WARDROBE MALFUNCTIONS!

He's bigger than Randy. Yes, I compared both of their wardrobe malfunctions extensively.

A MARRIOTT IN THIS TOWN? HE BETTER INVITE ME BACK TO HIS ROOM

I WOULD SWAP THE BILLS. I TEND TO OBSESS LIKE THAT!

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I COULD USE SOME SUNSHINE!

Kait calls me that, and she is the ONLY one I let get away with it!

But for Theo...he could call me slut/whore/kelly kelly and I'd let him!

MILLION DOLLAR SMILE!

OH MY EDGE, MACK, THIS WAS AMAZING!

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!

I will put extra sex with Edge in yours!
Thecatchisdeadliest chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Loved it! You MUST continue it!
Thee Britty chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
THIS WAS EPIC. I KNEW IT, I JUST KNEW IT!

D

I liked this, even though it does have Teddy in it. Lol. Sunny would probably die if Ted did that in real life, ya know. Well, I've decided Randy's not safe if he comes close to where I live because well, just sayin' his psyche would be damaged after I got ahold of him. :)

Haha.

I'm working on your one-shot, sort of. Do you like to Christmas shop? Just curious.

:)

LUBS, Y