Oh my gosh I was waiting for this update. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Oh I was waiting for rose to show up, Drama. Lol and I am looking toward to John finding out. ;D again thanks for the update.

OMG Please I am Begging you! Post a new Chapter! I Love this ;)

update or I'll cry .. not kidding . I check 4 times a day

wow . update update update please ! im so interested .

I loved this chapter. Very cute how they became a couple, not the traditional boring way. :-)

Hi! I agree with what most readers have said, this is a very interesting story that it's developing in a very nice and intriguing way :) I like Abrielle and her no-nonsence attitude (very Bender-ish, of course).

However, I have to agree with musicgrl, there were some grammar/spelling mistakes, and it was kind of confusing the beginning of chapter 6 because you didn't know who was narrating the story, Abrielle, John, AJ? Anyhoo, that's my only suggestion, to clarify under whose POV you're writing :)

That's it, girl :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I find myself interested in where this is going. I kind of like Abrielle, despite being a child!OC, maybe because of the focus you've given to her feelings rather than anything external, I find it it easy to relate to her. And you describe her feelings well. (By the way, her child behavior was kind of cliche, but I appreciate the fact that you were trying to tap into her child-mind and try to describe things through her POV.)

The thing that distracts me from the fict itself are random spelling/grammar errors that could probably be cleared up through a sharp re-read or a beta reader (just, you know, a second pair of eyes).

"She needs to be in bed its almost 2 in the morning."

Should be more like:

"She needs to be in bed; it's almost two in the morning."

So yeah, really, just little clean-ups would make this story a lot smoother, thus making it easier to focus on what's going on with Abrielle.

Absolutely adorable! I feel like the Breakfast Club members are a little bit out of character, but people grow up. People change. So I understand. Update?

Interesting. This is new; I haven't run across a next generation fic quite like this before.

No I'm not from Tennessee. Though some of my family live in the deep south. That's how I picked out her accent. Tennessee is just really close to Illinois so I picked that one.

Are you from Tennessee?

Please update this is very interesting!

"Gramps it was horrible meeting you and part of me hopes you’ll burn in hell...tell Gramma I hope just as much for her too!"

Funniest line ever I cracked up hardcore I can't wait for the next chapter

Can't wait to read what happens next. Also, who Monica is and how John ended up with her.

Your first fan fic? Really? Well, for a first, this is REALLY good! Update soon! :D