|Reviews for The Ship|
| one of the lost chapter 3 . 3/18/2009
I am really enjoying this so far. I'll finish up tonight.
| Kes chapter 19 . 3/2/2009
I've been really appreciating this story, but one thing threw me almost completely out; the idea that Luke and Mara would be afraid and need to resort to desperate measures to subdue twenty-odd untrained forceless street toughs. That, to me, seemed completely ludicrous. But I'm certainly still reading; you have a great grasp of character, and a delicate way of adding little touches to your scenes that deepen them greatly.
| BrokenPoetry chapter 33 . 7/20/2008
wow, I mean, just, damn! That was incrediable!
| Rogue7 chapter 33 . 1/26/2006
Fantastic story, well done, I look forward to reading your other works
| Kitten Kisses chapter 29 . 6/29/2005
Wow, I really liked this chapter. It cracked me up, though, how Luke wanted a holo, and then just let it keep going... They'd best delete those before Leia or Karrde or even Ghent or someone does!
| Kitten Kisses chapter 28 . 6/28/2005
Aww, the ending to this chapter was so cute! Actually, the whole chapter was great. The old guys are gone, now, too. Which is too bad. Because you made them likable characters. )
A great job! I'll be back tomorrow to (hopefully) read the rest.
| Kitten Kisses chapter 27 . 6/28/2005
I love how you save the actual "I love you" for later. It makes it so much sweeter to read.
I have to admit, the old guys are growing on me...
| Kitten Kisses chapter 26 . 6/28/2005
Mara did it! She said it! It was so sweet, though. Actually, this whole chapter was very soft and mellow. I liked it!
| Kitten Kisses chapter 25 . 6/28/2005
That was a great flashback. Well written, and lovely. You did a splendid job with this chapter. _
| Kitten Kisses chapter 24 . 6/28/2005
A shorter chapter. Well, they're down to four minutes. Luke's plan had better be good! And if not, then my suggestion to Mara would be...oh, I dunno. Make the best of her last four minutes of life? She could jump on Luke or something.
Like they say, they'll go out with a BANG! (Okay, so that was dumb...)
| Kitten Kisses chapter 23 . 6/28/2005
I think that Luke and Mara will be able to get away from the ship (or turn off the self-destruct) in six minutes. Maybe five. D
| Kitten Kisses chapter 22 . 6/28/2005
Ahh, a very great chapter, indeed! It's too bad I have to wait until after work to find out how their fun in the turbolift works out.
| Kitten Kisses chapter 21 . 6/28/2005
Aww, the way you write Jacen, Anakin, and Jaina is so...cute! You're very good at writing children- sometimes, it can be hard to do.
Han and Winter were getting awfully close- but it seems that Leia is big help to the cause.
Once again, I have to say that I find Artoo cute.
| Kitten Kisses chapter 20 . 6/27/2005
Nice chapter! _
| Kitten Kisses chapter 19 . 6/27/2005
Hahaha, poor Artoo gets exploded at.
A nice flashback scene, too.