Reviews for What Is Love?
EmeraldNeko chapter 7 . 2/19/2011
ahh, great story. porr Yugi. you gotta update soon, please update soon, i need good stuff to read and your story is absoultly fantasic. you are a very good writer and have very good ideas. can't wait to see what happens to Yugi and Atemu. update soon please xxx
yayubaru1 chapter 7 . 11/21/2010
wanna know how silly i am?

at first i was going to say that you took Aibou from the series cause i don't remember it being in any of your other chapters but when i reread the chapter i realized that it was the Mind link not the word Aibou that you inserted. nice choice by the way it's exactly what they need to help yugi feel better. i mean think about it now he wont have to tell Atemu what went wrong in his past but show him which is easier.

This is really good please update it soon -
SilentShadows101 chapter 7 . 10/28/2010

i luv this story!

Please continue it!
Phoenix0192 chapter 7 . 10/5/2010

Please update soon, i have to say very nice cliffy

great story the only point i would make is that you use some strange tensing (past/present/future tense gets mixed up within a single sentence)

amd you also used some words that dont exist or dont work in that context, i think it was you mixed unfomfort with discomfort,

Just some constructive critisism, sorry that im a knitpicker i just believe in helping people to improve

LOVING the story, please update it soon *insert puppy dog eyes*

Keep up the good work

- Phoenix
the dark euphie chapter 7 . 9/24/2010
All Atemu can do is be patiant with little Yugi.
TyrannicalCupcake chapter 7 . 6/21/2010
this is a great story!

The Lady Caroline Muze chapter 7 . 4/24/2010
lmao nice i love the chapter nice cliff hanger hunny. more feedback later when i can read it more thoroughly
dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 4/22/2010
Good chapter. Yugi and Atemu are developing a mind link. Good that will make it easier to find wherever his evil stepfather took him. I hope they are not too late!
Skye-Yue chapter 7 . 4/21/2010
MIND LINK! :D Do I get a cookie? I know you get one! Cuz this is a good chap! *hands you a cookie shaped like Yami.* Yepyepyep there it is.

Yami: She's not gonna gie you a cookie, ya know.

Me: *sniff* but...why?

Niza: Because your weird.

Me: Not really...

Nova and Yugi: Yes, REALLY.

Me: *walks out*
MissShortPants chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
MIND-LINK! i don't know why but i've always loved their mind-link. oh-no what's gonna happen to poor Yugi! Atemu better save him quickly. (or anyone for that matter) great story so far! )
Adevra chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
You updating this totally made my morning. (: Thank you.

Oh, and you added the mind-link thingy, right?
JennieWithAnIE chapter 7 . 4/17/2010
i don't watch yu-gi-oh, but i'm gonna say that first little part...

was i right?

can't wait for the next chapter :)
The Lady Caroline Muze chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
i'm mad it does not have anything else to go with it and only ends at chapter six... i think this is a good story
YuugiMutouLover chapter 6 . 4/6/2010
I like it! I really do! I'm like Yugi, I hate being touched. I can't wait to see what happens. I hope Yugi can get over his fear. Atemu is being really sweet, it's nice. Update soon! I like it so far!
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