|Reviews for Raven, Tantei kun?|
| Fire Nina chapter 5 . 3/4
Aw I wish their was more! I love it!
| Conan02 chapter 5 . 12/31/2013
This is great! Can you continue?! It's so... How to say?... Interesting and compelling
Please continue the story!
| IWillNeverAdmitToThis chapter 5 . 5/30/2013
please continue this fic
| Elfhunter chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
I enjoy the plotline and am awaiting your next chapter. How long will Conan be able to hide the pain in his back?
| Gcatthewonderful chapter 5 . 1/21/2013
PERFUME MADAFACKAR IT SMELLS LIKE CHICKEN.
| Gcatthewonderful chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
A MADAFACKING DOVE MEN.
A MADAFACKING DOVE.
| RoseAngel16 chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
This is so good so far! I can't wait until the next chapter updates soon pretty please!
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 5 . 11/30/2012
Hehe I wonder if Kaito knows where his bird went? And how will the bird be explained? Hope u update again soon plz
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Hmm...Pure black wings. It reminds me of D. , in the anime when Daisuke used his power instead of Wiz to conjure up his wings. Only it was red but it soon turned back to it's normal pure black Dark's wings.
Damn, I love your stories, they are alway so damn intriguer and unique. I love them so much.
| My Solitude chapter 5 . 12/31/2011
Interesting chapter. I actually thought that the dove was Kaito. X3
| Moonlite Streak chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
I will start off with a congratulations for coming up with, and starting, the whole movieAU-wings concept. Wow. I LOVE movie AU's, even though they're really rare. (like diamonds. All the good fics must be hiding in Kaito's house XD )
However, your story is special. It uses the movie only as a starting point, a catalyst if you will. After the initial wing-reveal event, this fic becomes totally your own.
I'll continue onwards. Your spelling, punctuation and grammar are a joy to read, and the writing style, descriptive phrases and vocabulary are exceptional! The emotional moments bring a tear to my eye, they are so beautifully described.
Now for the tricky part. You see, I love angst, but it has to be what I call 'meaningful angst'. The balance in your story is perfect, Conan's inner turmoil on his illogical existence and his self-loathing. However, as the story progresses, I wouldn't want for him to become completely consumed by grief while everyone around him is totally supportive, y'know?
If everyone loved Conan for who he his and saw the beauty of his hidden secret, then there would be no need to be depressed, neh? The speed at which he is lightening up now is perfect. *thumbs up*
If this were my fic, I would give him a couple of days (2 or 3) with Dove-san for his mood and general thoughts about himself to start to lighten before a major Kid confrontation, or another main event takes place in the story.
He will still question his illogicality and what he is, bit he will start to believe that maybe its not so bad, that maybe, he can be human too.
I reckon that Ran should say something that inadvertently cheers him up, such as a discussion with Sonoko over favourite birds (and hers would be raven, obviously. You'd have to make up a valid reason though).
Alternatively, when she notices Dove-san, she could tell Conan about one time when she took care of a baby bird as a child. Conan could then remember it from his point of view, e.g. with a flashback. He could link the bird to himself as a metaphor, e.g. a wounded wing to his wounded heart, but could Ran fix him back up like she healed the tiny, helpless bird back then?
Well, I'm just tossing 'round ideas, but perhaps you could mix 'n' match a few...Anyway, I'd like to round off this review by giving you a pat on the back for your marvellous efforts. This fanfic is easily in my top three favourite fanfics on the whole internet, throughout all the fandoms (e.g. TV series and books included). It is an amazing, warm and inspiring fanfic where we see Conan's masks crack and glimpse the small, lost boy underneath. Afterall, he's only human.
(or not, according to him)
It may be unseemly, but I would be ready, and willing, to beg for you to finish this fanfic and perhaps even start a sequel. It has great potential, and is already one of the best stories out there today. Please, please, please update!
From your loyal and entranced reader,
| justjoy chapter 5 . 10/14/2011
As per requested in your A/N:
I thought the style so far was pretty good - it clearly puts across the descriptions of people/places etc. without actually bogging down the storyline narration. As for the story... no complaints there either! I actually like how you've paced your story, even if 3 chapters for a day is remarkably long. The problem with a majority of stories nowadays is too much happening in too short a time (in my opinion, at least) so this is a refreshing change.
Would love it if Conan could actually meet Kaito in person though, minus the disguises. As for how this will change their future interactions at heists... but then again, I suppose stuff like that's already in your plot, so no need to suggest it anyway.
(And in an unrelated side note, good to know that I'm not the only one who associates ravens with Conan/Shinichi - it's oddly fitting.)
I know this one's currently placed on hiatus according to your profile, but would definitely love to see an update some time in the near future!
Again, great work on this fic, and I look forward to seeing more
| Kayla 44 chapter 5 . 8/16/2011
This is an interesting story. Please continue it. I love the idea and don't want this abandoned. It works well.
| llamaglamasama chapter 5 . 8/14/2011
This is adorable! I adore Dove-san and like all of the emotion you put into the characters. I look forward to seeing more!
| shemi-chan chapter 5 . 4/29/2011
I love this story!
Especially the wings - I have a weakness for them, too ;
Your writing style is really good, it was interesting to read and I couldn't remove myself from the computer until I read it all. Too bad it's only 5 chapters, the story is really good, so you should really update it!
The only thing I didn't like was that Conan is calling the Dove with "-san"... I think it's a little out of character for him. The only ones who add this honoriffic to animals in Japan are little kids and sometimes girls who want to look cute. But I can overlook that, since I found the rest of the story perfect (_)
So please write some more, I'll be eagerly waiting!