|Reviews for The Little Medic That Could|
| Not so Dark chapter 16 . 6/27/2010
Today, when I checked my profile (quickest way to see if my favorites have updated) I read, at the top of the list, "The Little Medic That 'YAY!'" xD
Awesome! Thank you so much for updating this story! I love it.
O,o Lifeline, don't jump into knife fights! It's a really bad idea to startle someone with a knife (or worse, a gun). I'm just really, really happy it wasn't a bad injury.
xD Doc: "Who stabbed my Medic?"
Ohhhhh! That was such a funny line. I couldn't help but laugh out loud when I read Doc's entrance.
Mm, so now he knows what it is like to be the patient.. Another experience to add to the Lifeline we all love. xD Go BeachHead!
And then, after all these warm, funny and slightly worrying events, there is a mission? Oooh! I can't wait! This will be a really big test for Lifeline. So soon after being stabbed, he'll have to deal with the stress (and excitement) of being a combat medic for the Joes.
I wonder if he'll come face to face with any Cobras? Or if he'll be really, really lucky and just have to deal with impatient Joes wanting to get back to the fight? All that training drilled into him will come in handy. x3
Anyways. Another wonderful chapter, thank you for writing it. I've had my little Lifeline fix. Heheh. I shall stop bugging you for updates now. xD
With LOTS of love, hugs and cookies!
| zenbon zakura chapter 16 . 6/27/2010
ouchies stomach stab
lucky he wasnt holding onto his intestins and the greenshirt didnt pull the knife out when he realized who he stabbed
| susan chapter 15 . 6/19/2010
can you please update this story soon? please and thank you)
| EllieLovesToRead chapter 15 . 6/15/2010
Sorry, I haven't reviewed for a while; I've been busy. I only managed to catch up with this story yesterday, and I have to say that I absolutely love how it's developed. It has a good balance of character appearances, no character is overused. I think your OCs are written very well and have progressed into strong characters! :) I thoroughly enjoyed the last chapter, it was very humorous and entertaining, thank you!
As I was reading this story, I couldn't help but think about what would happen if Lifeline was injured when he was out on a mission, who would treat him? Anyway, thanks again for such a lovely story. I hope to see an update soon, but take your time. :)
| susan chapter 15 . 6/8/2010
please update soon I can't wait for another read! please keep writing ) )
| Jiko Hitasura chapter 15 . 6/2/2010
omg...BeachHead on painkillers is hilarious XD I love you for that 3
| Autobot traitor chapter 15 . 5/31/2010
I now heart you. This very funny, it don't look very good but when I clicked on it. I couldn't stop but keep reading.
| Strapakai chapter 15 . 5/30/2010
Good Job Uban!
I am sure she is not the only one to dream to shoot BH in the ass.
| Not so Dark chapter 15 . 5/29/2010
Ahahahaha! Even though she is an OC, Uban is a fun character to have around. It is the way you write it and slowly introduced her and other OCs that make them so enjoyable. Wonderful!
Thank you so much for this funny chapter. I really enjoyed being drawn in; it felt like I was right there beside her.
And poor Beach, getting shot in the butt with a paint ball rifle. Ouch. I'd be more angry about the shot in the rump than the broken collarbone. Dx
Loved it. More please? Heheh.
With loves, hugs and cookies,
| Comix28 chapter 15 . 5/29/2010
Aww poor BH! I love the way he kept mentioning his very sore derrire. Poor nany. And the way Duke stayed so calm and sympathetic was too hilarious. I love love looooved it!
| susan chapter 15 . 5/29/2010
well it was a very good story! Life Line nearly told beach head that some one was after him. it good that Life Line remembered and kept his mouth shut. or he be joing beach head in the infirmary
well I hope beach head * ahem * got it in the end so to speak.
maybe low light will tip his next recruitsf for sniper training to get him in the behind...
please keep writtng ') ')
| susan chapter 15 . 5/28/2010
Oh nice job! LOL I liked the part she nailed him in the rear end...
please keep writing more chapters... )
| Psyk2 chapter 15 . 5/28/2010
ROTFLMAO! (pun intended)
Love it and can't wait for more. I don't know who to feel sorry for more - BH or Uban.
| Karama9 chapter 15 . 5/28/2010
Nice chapter, worth the wait. I absolutely LOVE Beach Head being slightly loopy, but not enough not to know it. Loopy and pissy all at once... hilarious.
I have to admire Duke's patience in this one. He's going to have to start switching headache medicine soon for the stuff to still be effective.
I also really like how Beach "finds" volunteers for Lifeline.
| Ghanie chapter 15 . 5/27/2010
Poor Beach! lol