|Reviews for Being There|
| pointoforigin chapter 16 . 2/24/2010
The chapters are getting better and better. Could it be because Sam and Jack are getting closer and closer. ;-)
I guess they weren't that hungry for food after all, since they let the food get cold. o)
| BlindingFirefly chapter 15 . 2/24/2010
My friggin' gosh, I love this story! Your perspectives of Jack are awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| BettyHall223 chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
I like your ending much better than what we saw in the episode. Very good and well written.
| sheenabeena chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
"He'd forgotten it was even possible to feel this way. In the depth of his despair, he'd almost forgotten it was possible to feel anything else at all." I adore that line! Anyway, lovely finish to the series. Great job! Can't wait to see more of your stuff! :)
| LadyMo chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
Wow that was great. The show never pictured what he did after she went down to say good-bye to Jacob but I like your version. They left alot up in the air and hinted at things which sometimes is good and sometimes bad. I like yours because it fits perfectly with the show. They could have written that end and it would have taken from nothing. They have showed before Jack comforting Sam.
| Hockey17 chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
Another wonderful chapter - can't wait for the next - keep that keyboard tapping!
| BecauseHeLives chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
I like the last chapter a lot. Good ending, very fitting all around.
| VGWrighte chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
That was sweet. It seems like you got back to your original premise. A lot of the intermediate chapters seemed a little forced, but this one was very natural.
| gater62 chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
That was beautiful Jenn! This is how the scenes we didn't see played out!
| Moosepath01 chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Well done.
| leiasky chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
I could so see RDA saying her name and then enveloping her in his arms. Really, no other words are needed. Everything between them has always been expressed in their eyes.
| Ellie 5192 chapter 15 . 2/23/2010
Perfect, wonderful, amazing resolution. So accurate to what we saw in the show, and so true to them, and so underplayed that I just loved it.
Very very good. Great. Can't wait for more!
| froggy0319 chapter 15 . 2/22/2010
You had me crying at the end of this one, but it was so perfect. Just wish we could have saw this scene - we were robbed, we were robbed :)
| Nynaeve506 chapter 15 . 2/22/2010
:: sniffles :: So ANGSTY and yet so sweet. :: sniffles ::
| Ellie 5192 chapter 14 . 2/21/2010
Poor Jack! You really portrayed his mixed feelings, and his anguish very well. Very Jack. I hope he gets better.