|Reviews for Concerning Sparrow|
| ziggy3 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
I liked this- the wit and humour works really well and I could almost see their faces- especially Norrington - his 'voice' is particularly well developed, especially the last line.
| piewacket chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
I like the premise for this short character piece. I think you could expand it a bit more and go into a little more depth. Also, you might want to seek a Beta to assist with verb tenses-there were some odd changes. Though, that might be due to English not being your primary language.
| emmiswe chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
haha! I can totally see this happening as a part of what we didn't see when they were running around fighting for the key. Nice job!