|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Soul of a Chimera|
| chris chapter 9 . 12/27/2013
while your spelling distracts from the story a bit,it can be overlooked and you can still enjoy the story. I'm hoping life gives you the time to write,and your muse gives you the inspiration to complete this story.
| doubledamn chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
NOT THE HAIR! ANYTHING BUT THE HAIR!
Only someone who spends time in his hair (like Lucius Malfoy) would appreciate what Harry has just gone through.
| doubledamn chapter 5 . 12/8/2013
I'm loving this, although the three souls still seem a bit segregated. I don't think that's going to change until later when all barriers are down and he becomes 'one' at the moment he's still sort of three people. Once he stops remembering things 'as Tom' or 'as Harry' and just starts remembering things as 'him' then the souls would be fully integrated into a singular being.
Can't wait for more. Keep it up.
| jslee102 chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
I realize that you are not updating this story, but I thought I would comment and tell you that it is very good and unique.
| pikachucat chapter 9 . 11/2/2013
| Tomon chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Heh, everybody have a weakness. In Harry's case it's his hair :-D Let's hope that Voldemort never find out :-D
Anyway, very appealing story and could prove to be more than very good. I'm really sad about the fact that it's just another of the abandoned stories on this site.
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
I do hope you come back to this, because it's fascinating and hysterical all at once.
| Tomon chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
I just hope Fleur will remember her great dislike for christmas eyed freak :-D Though I'm afraid we won't get so far in the story. It's shame since it has very intereting concept :)
| Ranmaleopard chapter 9 . 10/10/2013
This is god damned awesome I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!
| Micheal myers Halloween lover chapter 9 . 9/26/2013
| kariza2013 chapter 9 . 9/8/2013
rofl harry worrying about his hair! really like the story!
| Lord Mortensen chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
Awesome! please update soon!
| ShutInBookWorm chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
I really like this story it is supremely interesting and brilliant and I dearly hope for more preferably sometime soon.
| Pradian chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Interesting take on the story. Would love if you continue.
| LoriStori chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
Dammit, now I have to wait for a new chapter. By the way, I love how you made Harry a L'Oreal Badass, so to speak (the fact that his hair getting messed up is capable of pissing him off more than the fact that he just got into a fight with a troll in a school for children causes me to have a laughing fit beyond what is normal).
Fabulous writing, by the way, and I hope you ignore the pompousness inherent when I tell that me saying such a thing is really quite rare, because I have very exacting standards when it comes to English (seventeen I may be, idiotic and immature I am not! XD). So I suppose a congratulations is in order - well done on making the grammar cut created by a slightly OCD English major-in-the-making! Cheers! :D
Just for the record, by the way, the only thing that I have a couple of issues with is that earlier in the story, you made a reference about how the longer Harry spends with the three souls he has, the more used to it he gets, and the more he stops feeling like Tom or Geneva or the Ghost of Harry's Past, and more just like the Harry he is when he is all three of them at once. This part confuses me, mainly because it gave me the impression that all three souls were merging more significantly, and soon I would be unable to distinguish them as separate entities, and would come to just see them as a uniformed whole. However, based upon the latest chapter, Harry's clearly still capable of telling the difference between thoughts based upon Tom's experience and thoughts based upon Geneva's experience (Ghost of Harry's Past doesn't really have 'experience' so much as 'unidentified Stockholm's syndrome and an overabundance of world-weary and jaded cynicism in pretty much equal amounts' - lack of innocence, as it were).
I suppose where I was going with that is that I was under the impression that the longer Harry's Chimaera Soul existed, the less he (and I, myself) would be able to notice the differences between his three souls. Will Harry always be having thoughts originating for his other selves, or will that fade into nothingness later on?
Other than that, I really don't have much to say, except that this is an excellent story concept, and I hope you don't mind me making myself your unofficial beta-reader-via-review - so to speak.
Also, pardon me for the bad names in this review, but most of them are strangely appropriate, at least from my point of view. Feel free to make fun of me about it. ;)
Now then, excuse me while I partake in some delicious updates from some of my other followed and favorited stories.