|Reviews for Naruto The Fallen One|
| tasheika.conley chapter 8 . 6/20
Hi I love the story I hope you are still updating it. But please no kushina. But I would like kourina.
| TheNatertatertot chapter 8 . 1/27
this is gud why no update?
1. she is naruto's aunt
2. regret that gaara had to live a life like his, but worse
3. maybe kill sakura or sasuke
4. yes, and he is captured by leaf anbu
NOW THAT I WROTE YOU A STORY FRAME...UPDATE!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
Come on the grammar was shit and you even have beta, someone's not doing their job right
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/25/2016
update pls pls pls
| Rosenkruz chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
I'm not trying to flame, but I find this to be very poorly written. It's a good concept, but the poor grammar, syntax, and back-n-forth between English and Japanese terms for the same word make it very difficult for me to invest my time into reading it. My apologies if this review offends you.
| Ying the Nine Tail Fox chapter 8 . 10/3/2016
Kushina in the harem with Naruto HELL YES along with her daughter(s).
| Pinku Crystaka chapter 3 . 9/30/2016
Hi I have just started reading your story it is a good story just a very few mistakes like putting raikaze instead of raikage
| DominoNamikaze2010 chapter 8 . 8/23/2016
I agree to Kushina being in the pairing...have Naruto get to know her and he'll see she isn't so bad...maybe send them on a mission together? maybe undercover where they have to pose as a couple?
| ErmagehrdBastehrd chapter 8 . 6/25/2016
Well I recommend you to rewrite this story or get a beta reader, considering English is your first language your language skills need to be improved. The grammar and spelling heavily affect the reading experience in a negative way.
| Dante3142 chapter 8 . 6/13/2016
I look forward to the next chapter.
| Dragoncyber22 chapter 8 . 5/22/2016
continues the story
| Lewis-Sama chapter 8 . 4/26/2016
| Sl4p chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
This story would probably pretty good if your English wouldn't suck so bad, in the first chapter anyways, that I just lost any will to continue past the first quarter of chapter 1... This needs a serious rewrite, looks like you used the google translator for the biggest part of the chapter.
| xNinjaxRebelx chapter 8 . 4/21/2016
I enjoy reading this story. I would like to see Kushina in the pairing.
| ncpfan chapter 8 . 4/11/2016
Good update. And yes, I for one would love to see Kushina in the pairing.