|Reviews for The Quileute's and the Cold One's|
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
I thought about doing a story like this but with a different plot, it's a very good idea for a twilight story.
| Ariana Harper chapter 14 . 2/28/2012
i love your story please,please keep it coming
i really like your story
i was sad when it was finished
| graciecosmo chapter 10 . 2/23/2011
I love the story but just to help out,
I think the correct spelling for converst is converse and wright is really right
But this is an awesome story!
| Nicolette. that's my name chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Hey. I just had to review since I thought it was cool that ur character's name is Nicolette. I'm like, the only person I know with the name Nicolette... But I don't get called Nico, I get called Nicky for short.. Anyway.. The story's good so far! Bye!
| yay chapter 17 . 12/7/2010
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 7 . 11/26/2010
This was good. The whole fire scene felt a bit rushed to me. I think that it could have gone off a lot smoother than it did. But I give you kudos all the same for writing a good story(: There are just minor rewordings that I would do because I'm annoying like that and notice stuff like that.
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 6 . 11/26/2010
Ooh she got in trouble! I liked it, actually. You had a ton of words that were misspelled, but other than that I liked it.
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 5 . 11/26/2010
This was a good chapter but I thought the whole scene where they were trying to save the people? I thought that was a tad bit rushed): I mean, you could have done a lot of things with a scene like that. But don't get me wrong, I still love your story.
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
It was a good chapter but you misspelled some words like 'tolled' should be 'told' and 'Wright' unless you're referring to the Wright brothers it should really be 'right'.
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 3 . 11/26/2010
Good chapter. I liked it. I thought where Jacob and Sam were shopping with Nico and they were wondering why she was upset? I would have thought that would seem obvious considering what she's been through in such a short amount of time.
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 2 . 11/26/2010
Very sad chapter in some parts mainly because of her love for her mother and now realizing that she's dead. That's all very sad but well-written, too.
My only one small question is: Why would they have her in a motel? I mean, if a maid service or anyone from the hotel that had a key were to come in and see this huge wolf on the bed, wouldn't that blow the secret? And she could attack whoever were to come in the room.
I was just wondering like, why they didn't just take her into the forest or back to the rez or something. But anyways...good chapter.
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
This is really good so far. I can't wait to read on and see what happens.
| DaniLautner chapter 16 . 11/26/2010
| nannz chapter 9 . 11/26/2010
i love your story...its a spell-binding story...lovely to read
| CHSShortie chapter 15 . 11/23/2010
hey great story but i carnt find imwiththepackhottie to see the sequel so could could you help me fing her