"McGonagall waved them towards her and Draco felt his pulse fasten." Just a heads up. Fasten is not the correct word to use here. You likely mean quicken or to speed up, but fasten means to button up or to latch something closed. English can be incredibly tricky this way. Fast Quick but Fasten / Quicken. Otherwise I'm super loving this so far :) Keep up the good work

I love it sooo much but it’s a bit difficult to read as you keep just switching times and you don’t transition well from them doing different things. Maybe work on that but other than that I love it sooooo much! Keep writing!
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I hate Ronald Weasley but I also love him! I love your story and it fills all of my satisfactions (non sexual way) I needed a story like this! ️️️

Omg this was such an amazing and heart warming story and oMG THE FEELS! Such a great job. Thank you so muchhh!

you think? I think she practically eyed my underwear! lmaoD gosh! you have really great Sense of humour and sarcasm too

This was great, it had the perfect amount of humor and romance, the relationship change flowed perfectly and realistically and I loved it. Amazing job, one of my favs ️

Up until 4:00 AM then 1:00PM reading this; it was great!

brilliant and funny

Just a thought... Harry is right handed, but his right hand is joined to Malfoy's left, correct? If Malfoy is left handed, wouldn't it be difficult for him to write as well?

I'm enjoying the story so far, but I'm wondering how Harry can have his hands rubbing all over Draco and Draco have his hands in Harry's hair if they are still glued together...

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I'm so incredibly bad at this! But I'll give it a shot
I adore how they're getting along. If they aren't careful they'll find themselves best friends forever. I have already said this, but I love this storey so incredibly much!

This was absolutely precious. I have never had so much fun reading a book before.
Are you sure this was the first time you wrote in English? It's incredibly well written!
I really love this storey so much. I just wanted to say that, I guess.

DRACO IS DREAMING,.

... why make harry so helpless? first he cant learn anything without hermione's help and now he cant even tie a tie? when he's been wearing one for 7 years?