|Reviews for Roses of Memory|
| Farla chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Check your story after uploading, so you'll pick up on obvious things like all the links being stripped from your story.
You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or bells.
Anyway, yet again we have May being an idiot and needing to be rescued, because apparently girls are all whiny incompetent idiots.
| safira2008 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
A may not was kidnapped, continue soon
| XxUchihaCherryBlossomxX chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
OMG THIS IS GETTING EXCITING! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| Arysd chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
So... So exciting. o: Oh man.
But just knowing that May won't immediately recognize Drew, Harley, and Solidad is heartbreaking. ;x;
And I can only imagine how guilty Drew will feel. x:
As for if May should be put with Gary or Brendan... It depends on what role they take. If they're going to be abusive, mean, or anything like that go with Brendan. If they're going to be totally innocent and stuff, go with Gary. xD
I love Gary, but I don't want him to be a bad guy, so. xD