|Reviews for NGE: Nobody Dies|
| the DragonBard chapter 27 . 3/4
| the DragonBard chapter 5 . 2/28
BEST CLOSING LINE "EVER!"
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/25
You just made my fay
| Uraharaisgod chapter 102 . 2/15
Dayumn, you just invalidated 30 chapters of your own story? Wow...that's just broken...I must say, people have done this before, but I've never seen it done for more than 3 chapters of *dreams*, 30 is an all time record, especially when each of your chapters are roughly 5400 words long...so 162,000 words of work was all a dream? Well f_ me, I've seen entire fanfics shorter than the amount of work you made a dream...
| Uraharaisgod chapter 71 . 2/14
Whu-? Shinji's Lilith Aura is strong enough to get MANA to attack him? I thought in earlier chapters, Mana was immune to the whole Lilith Aura, something to do with how her uterus was replaced with a Hard Drive (where she keeps her illegally downloaded music), so she can't feel urges to procreate?
| Uraharaisgod chapter 66 . 2/13
...Shinji has become a Nephilim? Oh god, his fear of the male Rei cosplayers has come to life, he's now a Rei colour swap of himself 0.0
| Uraharaisgod chapter 50 . 2/13
...I wonder, is Kaji's advice cards going to be a recurring theme? And really, he tested them out on the resident lesbian? And now, I can finally see just how broken Kensuke is, I figured he was just enamoured by Rei's chaos and following her dastardly plans, but that explosives plan for SCIENCE AND GREAT JUSTICE was all his own work, Rei must be so proud.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 39 . 2/12
Huh...? I can get the plot premise, despite you actually skipping the battle, it's a fun idea...but why on earth were Yui and Kyoko inside 01 and 02? That I can't really understand, there's no reason why they would be in the Unit's to be taken to the alter-verse...
Also, where's canon Rei? She vanished after the battle, hasn't been seen or noted to exist since...
| Uraharaisgod chapter 35 . 2/12
...Gendou just had a punchout with the freakin President of America...What's more, judging from earlier words rather than be put into the doghouse with Yui, he scored some instead just by playing the "All part of the Plan" card, which apparently is an automatic turn-on for any Ikari providing the plan is devious enough...
I'm curious, does Shinji also have this trigger?
| Uraharaisgod chapter 25 . 2/12
Interesting alternate Sandalphon battle, so in this version I'm guessing Kaowaru woke up Sandalphon early? As such, it was far more dangerous when it did appear, especially mind controlling the entire base. Is Unit 00 now gone? It was pulverized and apparently it's core was destroyed, so does that mean Rei no longer has a Unit to pilot? They are running out of EVA's indeed...I mean Rei is almost a mini-Evangelion by herself with her insane strength and abilities, but still weaker than a Unit even if she did Falcon Punch an Angel halfway to destruction.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 20 . 2/12
Wait-a-minute...Uri and Pilot Ikari? *best possible social, romantic and sexual engagement partner*?
Ryouko is aiming to set her son up in a gay relationship?! Rather than have Ikari with Asuka?! Jaezus there is something just WRONG with that woman.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 14 . 2/11
Pfft, merchandising, and it seems Maya finally got her wish by accidentally turning Ritsuko on with the plug suit, seems her favourite idol/one sided love interest is now on the market XP
| Uraharaisgod chapter 7 . 2/11
...wait a minute...Ichi...a friend he has never met...contact through text only and has never seen her...seems to knows far too much about what's happening...strange references, claims that Ritsuko takes care of her...
Why do I get this distinct feeling that Ichi isn't a person, but a reference, as in refers to *One*, refers to...Unit 01?
Is this Ichi friend that Shinji has known all along actually been Unit 01 itself? Is that why you wrote that it *chose* him back in Chapter 1? And why it seems to work so well with him? I could be pulling a theory out of my backside, but now I've said it, it seems to make too much sense. Only disparity being how Unit 01 is so fluently capable of communication.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 4 . 2/11
...I'm kinda lost on this Sythesis system difference and how it works.
So far, we can see that Unit 01 has a higher synch rate than canon, and that it was referred to as a "She". Secondly, when Shinji went into a meditative state, it apparently responded giving an odd greeting back with seven red eyes, apparently able to communicate with him on some level. Now it turns out it can independently create Wormholes to Shinji's location if it needs to...that and apparently Unit 01 CHOSE Shinji before he even saw the Evangelion as it's user according to Misato.
Weird...my only guess is that it's a variant of somehow inserting versions of Rei into the system. That would explain red eyes and strangely cheery greeting to him if they are based off the current Rei, although why the EVA chose him, I dunno...
| Burn2Cinderz chapter 26 . 1/20
This has to be my favorite chapter so far.