Reviews for The Sahashi Plan
Godric Kharg chapter 3 . 8/7/2014
Interesting, looking forward to the next chapter.
Relthenar chapter 3 . 6/4/2013
while I do find this an interesting re-visit of the tale, the only critique I have is that if Minaka was a "true" believer in Fate or Destiny, he wouldn't get that worked up about it as only those who secretly have doubts about it do. "true" believer accept whatever happens as the right thing as it is impossible to change fate. Hence what happens is fate and pre-decided to happen
Silber D. Wolf chapter 3 . 11/22/2011
great story
Samantha S. Dracul chapter 3 . 8/12/2011
I loved! very good history!
Anzer'ke chapter 3 . 6/6/2011
While this is a very interesting story I am a little discouraged by the time since you last updated, is the story dead?

Well I hope you do conitune, there isn't much in this archive and your work adds greatly to it.
ht64wt258a4148yahoocom chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
i hope u keep it going especially when he comes face 2 face with tsukumi.
Nghtwng77 chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
I like the light-hearted nature of your fic. It ventures into the AU realm while still keeping hold of certain qualities that make the original what we love. I especially like the interaction of the characters and your writing style fits the story...you're very descriptive (in a good way). Can't wait for the next chapter.
GrrDraxin chapter 3 . 10/9/2010
Nice take on things. I never would have expected that you'd take some of the canon events and put a back-story to them, like with Kuu's situation.

Do update soon, though I see it's been a while since the last update, I would hope more is put into this.

Later.
fullhans1 chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
Good chapter.
Yo chapter 3 . 7/29/2010
I am glad to see you updated once more. I kind of feel that this has been an extended prologue so far, since as you mentioned, the changes will start picking up next chapter. To me, it has just be world-building of sorts - nothing bad but nothing spectacular as well. Of course, I remain interested in this story since it is a more gritty & possibly more "realistic" take on on the series with more plotting going around. Though that just may be my preferences since the Chairman & Minato's mother were such 'meh' characters. Naturally, Miya having a more prominent role (maybe) can't hurt either.

All in all, I am liking the story, but I think most anything would be an improvement on how the canon series started.
TheSilentSon chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Thank you for the update!

This story is really well written so far. I am not sure exactly where you are going with it yet, but I look forward to seeing what will happen in the future.
KonIsMyName chapter 3 . 7/28/2010
Another excellent chapter. I think everything was done pretty damn good, so no need to beat yourself up over it...

I liked Takami coming to explain things with Minato this early in the game, rather later like in canon. Also Miya's negative attitude toward Minato is nonexistent. Another change from canon which I enjoy...

Tsukiumi bit was hilarious, then again first time experiencing it so can't laugh too much at her...

Next chapter looks to be action packed and not just with fists...lol

Great chapter once again, thanks for cranking it out...
fullhans1 chapter 2 . 3/29/2010
Good story. I hope that you'll continue it.
KonIsMyName chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
Great chapter. A few mistakes here and there, but nothing that derived attention from the story...

I liked the subtle changes to Musubi's character. She doesn't seem that big of a ditz as canon. Although Minato seems to have a big morality stick jammed up his ass. I don't mind a timid Minato, but the not proper comment is the logic I came to with the stick declaration...

Matsu has always been one of my favorite Sekirei and this one for your story doesn't damper that at all. Her spying set-up is borderline creepy, but yet funny...

This chapter story wise good. The winging was nicely done as well as the interactions with the other tenants. I know it's still early in the game, but I can't wait to see what happens to Minaka when it's time to pay the piper...
Havenoname unsigned chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
To Daiski: I meant that in the end Minato still meets Musubi first like in canon. Still it's just the start of the story, so I'm sure the author has some other stuff planed besides what we've already seen.
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