|Reviews for Et In Terra Pax|
| Kendallwolf8 chapter 1 . 4/22
I'm always a sucker for Dean is Michael fics XD
| snowdragon23 chapter 1 . 2/8
This is the first fic I've read in which lucifer isn't misunderstood. I love the story!
| Vampyvii chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards review:
This was a very interesting piece- though the middle of the story is a bit convoluted, I still got the parallel Angel brothers/Winchester brothers conflict and angst. It was just hard to see where Michael ended and Dean began. I have to say that despite the confusion in places, I found this to be an enjoyable read, and am happy I got the chance to read it.
| SPN Mum chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards: November 2015
Maybe it's just me, but I found the transition from Dean into Michael a bit confusing. It was an interesting idea, that Michael couldn't kill Lucifer, even though Lucifer was going against their Father. It seems that Michael wanted to know what the big deal was about the humans, so he cut out his grace and became one, yet then he seems to have lost himself. This is where I became confused. Did Michael fall, become Dean Winchester, then forget all about Heaven and everything, until Castiel reminded him? Was Dean never really Sam's brother then? I understood that Dean/Michael saved the world, and that Sam never had to say yes to Lucifer, but it seems rather convoluted to me. I'm glad that both Dean and Sam lived...at least, I think they did.
I liked the angst that was developed between Sam and Lucifer, after Dean disappeared with Castiel. It was very believable that Sam would finally be ready to say yes to Lucifer when he thought he had lost Dean for good. Sam wouldn't want to live without Dean, especially after an Apocalypse. Some of the problems in the flow of the story might have been avoided if the reader had more explained to them, rather than being left in the dark along with Sam.
| SPNReadingManiac chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review:
A fascinating story, very original in concept and with a nice explanation of the mythology to support it. The jumping back and forth between time and characters appeared to be to create additional tension for scenes but was really unneeded. The concept alone was sufficient to create intrigue and reader tension in wondering if the promised solution would be the right one.
Very nice imagery and descriptions made the piece vivid and compelling. The use of Dean's name constantly in the first scene was a little distracting, distancing the reader quite thoroughly from the character's thoughts, even though the thoughts themselves appeared to be direct. The use of a pronoun for a character's third person introspection, once the reader knows who it is, makes for a closer personal connection between reader and character.
Very interesting story. Great job.
| pudding chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
That was great
| SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Oh Holy Night. This is beyond converse! C; Dean finding Michael's Grace and Michael becoming one with Dean. The memories and the emotions in this is raw and empathetic. Poor Lucifer still angry at the world and humans.
| Fabro de Verbis chapter 1 . 1/16/2015
Great story! I love the portrayal of Michael, and the way the story flows seamlessly together,
| karnillaofnorn chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
This story is fantastic. Definitely one of my favorites of this trope
| Jet Set Radio Yoyo chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Great story I liked it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Oh My that Was awesome
| INACTIVE-apocalyxtic98 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
This was interesting. I like the chronological order; at first it was slightly confusing, but after I realized what was happening it worked very well.
I also like how simple you've kept this. It makes it more poignant, I think.
Thanks for sharing!
| FenrirSmitesU chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Holy crap this is amazing and I absolutely love it
| Zarz chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Fun story! I love your portrayal of Dean and Michael, and how the two just seem to blend seamlessly into one another. Castiel is also amazing, and your method of switching between the different moments in time really works well. Great job!
| DancingCactus chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Oh, it's just so... awesome. Totally awesome. Deans doubts, Castiel's faith in him, Sammy... While I was watching SPN (the whole Apocalipse arch), I was always thinking about how similar are Michael's and Dean's situations. Both of them are "daddy's soldiers", both of them love thier little brothers, etc. And, finally, there is Lucifer... I love your Lucifer.