Reviews for Mistletoe Makeout
Sibuna4evs chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
BEST ONE-SHOT EVER! I loved every word! Please write more stuff like this!
natpercyannabeth143haleyjake chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
That was funny
Luv2BeSketchy chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
hahaha, I love the "stop right there, I swear, all we did was make out so get thar dirty thought out of your head!" part. I cracked up SO badly. love the story!

-Jeanie
It'sawhisper chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Love it!
1-troop-fan chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
oh lol, i loved when phoebe walked in, that was too funny! i also liked the end. actually, i liked the entire story, keep writing!
Kristen chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
HEY!

That was one of the best stories, (dramatic pause), EVER! Happy trails! Bye-Bye!

~Kristen~
sminches chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Cute, sweet, and funny! Dude, I love this story. Thank you for writing it, it made my day.
Alisha chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I like it, very sweet, and funny too. But then, I like all fanfics about Hayley and Jake, they just make such a cute couple. Anyways, I really loved this ending. One of my faves:)
actorofthefututre chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
THIS IS TO GET YOUR ATTENTION!

HURYY UP AND WRITE MORE JAYLEY STORIES. BUT NEXT TIME MORE ACTION!

:)
Jenseen Baez chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
I love this story so much because the one part when Hayley started to tease Jake again and when Jake told Hayley to shut up and when she said make me and he did by kissing her and then they lowered down towards Jake's bed
Writingaddict169 chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Aw, I liked this story! It was good! Yay!
CharmedMoon84 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Very cute and humorous, esp. with the sis walking in on them.

*Faves fic*
OutsiderRushheart chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
COOL! so should have happened!

can u please read my new fanfics too? Tnx.

(Are u gonna continue this?)
A Scarlet Rebel chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
:) "Stop right there! I swear all we did was make-out, so get that dirty thought out of your head." Best line! LOL!

-Scars
tvFANtastic26 chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
One of the few good Jayley/Troop fics around - Great job! :D
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