|Reviews for Chiaroscuro|
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/24/2014
I like your style of writing. It's simple yet perfect
| Violet Abilene chapter 30 . 4/21/2014
This was an unexpected update, but I'm happy it came! I really liked this- the use of the descriptive language, combined with the slight sensory imagery, really made it a good read. I always enjoy little one-shots or drabbles about Riza's relationship with her father, so this was very nice to read. I enjoyed it!
| kate4394 chapter 29 . 3/9/2014
How sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| ClosetFMAfan chapter 28 . 1/1/2014
I don't know why I've avoided reading this story for so long. I've always seen it when it pops up on the recently updated feed and have just never read it. I don't know what was wrong with me.
Well it's a good thing I was bored tonight because it got me to read this and I'm glad I did. And I'm making sure to review because I know your pain.
I seriously did enjoy reading this though. They're just very short and sweet. That's something I've always had trouble writing, so I always admire people who can pull it off. Good job!
| Violet Abilene chapter 28 . 1/1/2014
I liked this a lot- short and sweet and very good at setting the tone in that moment quickly. I'm happy this story is updating regularly again and I'm excited for the next chapter!
| Bluefire21 chapter 27 . 12/19/2013
It's is very much worth continuing, in my opinion. And for the record, I enjoy it.
| kate4394 chapter 27 . 12/14/2013
Please don't stop! They are really good. Don't give up! :)
| Violet Abilene chapter 27 . 12/14/2013
Ah- a pleasent surprise to see a new chapter up! I really enjoyed this chapter- it was very well written and I like how you brought up the discussion of God- it was done nicely! Very excited to see another chapter!
| RubytheJewel chapter 24 . 7/26/2012
If that story counts as one that was hard to rite, I can't imagine how good ur real writers muse writing is! Actually I can but oh well.;) plz update soon and ur royai rioting is wonderful!
| BlackBrightField2007 chapter 24 . 7/25/2012
nice! I like the way you put it but poor Riza had to stand all the pain. TT update soon
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| kate4394 chapter 22 . 6/15/2012
Lol! Oh I needed this. This was really good. I can't wait for your next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
| jacksparrow589 chapter 22 . 6/14/2012
I still stand by what I said when I looked it over: I love it. I honestly don't often write Roy as this... cocky, I guess, when he's younger, but you pulled it off very well. This is kind of reflects their grown-up dynamic, and I thoroughly enjoy that. :)
| jacksparrow589 chapter 21 . 6/13/2012
D'awww... It's one of those "I'll/We'll never say it out loud" moments. Simple, to the point, and cute as a freakin' button. But now I'm curious as to what Roy was doing.
Well, this certainly has my seal of approval, whatever that's worth. Probably about two cents, but hey, I still like it!