|Reviews for Waiting on You|
| Rockerchick098 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Omg I love this, please write more. I beg of you
| Nightmarcher89 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
That was a cute one-shot of the diner meeting. Out of the pairings in Twilight, Jasper and Alice definitely have the most interesting start to their relationship.
I'll read another of your stories.
| HyperPixiexoxo chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
this was really cute :)
| FrozenSoldier chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Wow! That was so so good! You should definitely do Jasper's POV of things or even their next conversation. You could even make this into a multi chapter story? I would read it :)
Yet again I love your closing line, it was perfect :D
Yep, he knows alright. He knows, just like I know.
We are meant to be.
Also, I love how you found the specific clothes they were wearing. I could totally picture them wearing them!
| Matilda-333 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
it was really good, it gave an excelent description and helped you see it clearly in your head. i think it was very sweet :) keep writing
| lilmissperfect14 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
| topeka999 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
This was really nice! I liked how you used descriptions a lot in your sentences. It gave you the perfect picture in your head.
| Patastic chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
This was absolutely wonderful. (seriously, no exaggeration.) That was really cute and I never get to read it in Alice's point of view except in poems :(. So this was a first. I love Jazzy's hat.
I told you you were awesome, keep writin Manda!
| bandgeek216 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
LOVE IT! LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! its so adorable and something we never actually got to see with the book and movie! its so cute!
| Skyuni123 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Awesome, that was really good and descriptive. 10/10 for effort and plain awesome story making.