Nice story. Glad that Ennis was all willing from the start, and Jack didn't have to convince him to be together.
Really good start for a sequel too.

nice how this segued into a holiday story. but better how jack liked to ride the train, not fly. how they stayed at the doubletree...the pillow on the bed, the meeting room. this is written out of your personal experience; why, it's a slash happening right after a slash convention...cool.

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excellent job! i usually don't like alternate reality type fics for brokeback mountain but i really love yours! keep writing can't wait to see more!