Reviews for The Broken Road Leads Home
katraj0908 chapter 1 . 5/2
Ugh. I liked this story except for the fact that Bella now goes to the UW. WSU all the way! ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
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Shawna chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
This story was okay, though I didn't enjoy the long lemon. The story line itself crossed between interesting enough for me to keep reading and boring enough to make me not want to read it again. I don't mean this in a harsh way, but I think the story could've had better diologue and it would've been good to throw in some conflict. I felt the story was too happily ever after, with no real threat for the characters to over-come.

Yes, I know it's a love-story but there should've been some kind of threat to them. Like Edward sees them and tries to separate them and gets furious and starts a big fight with Demetrie over Bella. Don't worry, the story was still interesting enough, that it held my interest until the end. I'm just giving you advice on how you could've made it better, so please don't get discouraged or lose heart. Keep up the good work!
jk chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Soooo hes 528? I wonder how many woman hes been with...hundreds? thousands? I just...yuck that's not right give bella a virgin and whats with the ass finger fucking I thought this was her first time ...her first time and hes doing that...gross
Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
it was good i liked it
My Eyez Are Watching Everyone chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
aww sweet D :)
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
I liked your story. Put together pretty well.

Jasper was lovely. 'Course, I {heart} him.

Demetri sounded pretty darn good, too.
onefidget chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Pretty good. I would have liked to see this written how longer with more development, but not too bad for a one shot. I enjoyed their chemistry as well as Bella and Jasper's friendship
Leppy99 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Awww so cute
Love it
Cant wait for ur next update
loventherussian17 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Love it
ShouldaBeenAWerewolf chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
I think this needs to be continued. There's no way it's simply finished. He didn't change her!
juliangelus chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
fantastic
christag banner chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Wow, loved it!
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
this was a very good story i very much enjoyed reading this and i am glad that Aro allowed Demetri to leave Italy and be with Bella and he found her too awesome as i may say and this is what Alice saw that Bella is Demetri soul mate ever so cool thank you for sharing this story
tinkerbear10 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
aww
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