Reviews for The Broken Road Leads Home
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 1 . 3/30
Elementalearthwolf101 chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
love it!
andrewpine chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
What exactly did Eddie do? once they got back from Volterra did he just turn around and run away like he always does? so Alice knew and as usual wouldn't say anything.
TinaF chapter 1 . 6/5/2016
Loved it!
princessnerra chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Great one shot! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Killer story.
MiccaF chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
Love it!
katraj0908 chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
Ugh. I liked this story except for the fact that Bella now goes to the UW. WSU all the way! ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Shawna chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
This story was okay, though I didn't enjoy the long lemon. The story line itself crossed between interesting enough for me to keep reading and boring enough to make me not want to read it again. I don't mean this in a harsh way, but I think the story could've had better diologue and it would've been good to throw in some conflict. I felt the story was too happily ever after, with no real threat for the characters to over-come.

Yes, I know it's a love-story but there should've been some kind of threat to them. Like Edward sees them and tries to separate them and gets furious and starts a big fight with Demetrie over Bella. Don't worry, the story was still interesting enough, that it held my interest until the end. I'm just giving you advice on how you could've made it better, so please don't get discouraged or lose heart. Keep up the good work!
jk chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Soooo hes 528? I wonder how many woman hes been with...hundreds? thousands? I just...yuck that's not right give bella a virgin and whats with the ass finger fucking I thought this was her first time ...her first time and hes doing that...gross
Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
it was good i liked it
My Eyez Are Watching Everyone chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
aww sweet D :)
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
I liked your story. Put together pretty well.

Jasper was lovely. 'Course, I {heart} him.

Demetri sounded pretty darn good, too.
onefidget chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Pretty good. I would have liked to see this written how longer with more development, but not too bad for a one shot. I enjoyed their chemistry as well as Bella and Jasper's friendship
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