|Reviews for Ron Does It Again|
| SwampyGreenie chapter 5 . 3/15/2013
Oh god...castrate.. ...oh god..that would...ew
P.s. O.o Snape a baby sitter? SNAPE?! lol
| SwampyGreenie chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
Omg I can't get enough of Malfoy's attitude! It's so...unexpected! and Harry is his bit*h?! xD I can't imagine it, but I actually am! Lol!
| SwampyGreenie chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
Poor Ron, not knowing what to think! xD And omg..Draco in DRAG?! xD The image in my head just won't go away! .
| SwampyGreenie chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
Oh wow. Malfoy... . That was so corny...but so...hot...
| SwampyGreenie chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Omg that was funny! I loved this!
Keep being awesome,
I'm heading off to the next chapter!
| Sheri Contrary chapter 6 . 9/19/2012
You story doesn't at all seem finished. :(
BTW...I like the drawing for this story...cute! :)
| Sheri Contrary chapter 5 . 9/19/2012
Lol. I cannot picture Snape babysitting. Hehe.
| Sheri Contrary chapter 3 . 9/19/2012
I almost mentioned this before, but decided not to...but I have to now. It's blonde for females and blond (no 'e') for males. Draco Malfoy is a blond.
I think I've read this. Hmm.
| Sheri Contrary chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
This is so funny! "But I'll enjoy holding you." *giggle*
| Sheri Contrary chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
"I've come to apologize for everything I've put you threw..." ***** Through, not threw.
"What ever prank your trying to pull it's not working..." ***** You're, not your (as you mean 'you are,' the contraction).
"Since when have the Malfoy's become so romantically inclined?" ***** You want Malfoys (plural, as in more than one), not Malfoy's (possessive, as in something belonging to one of them).
Pushing his chair back he looked at Ron, "come on let's get out of here." ***** Because there's no dialogue at the beginning of the sentence, the dialogue at the end must start with a capital letter (Come s/b capitalized).
Okay... *sigh* ...I have an issue with the word brunette. First of all, it's only spelled "brunette" for females...for males the spelling is "brunet." My second issue is that Harry has black hair and therefore is NOT a brunet. I see this in fics all the time and it drives me crazy. The term "brunette/brunet" is for people with varying shades of brown hair, from very, very light to very, very dark...but not black. Think of it this way, if you add the color white to the darkest brown, it because lighter and lighter shades of brown. If you add white to black over and over again, it becomes lighter and lighter shades of gray...not brown.
Anyway...I'm enjoying this so far...despite what it might look like by my corrections. Write on!
| Changedaccountssss chapter 6 . 7/21/2012
I know ffnet is a problem right now, so why don't you, if not on here, post the story on another site. I really like this, I'd like to read the whole thing. A lot of authors are going to adultfanfiction dot org or thehexfiles dot net.
| Kialandi chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Mmhm, I think you're going way too fast. Develop the descriptions. Your writing is good, though.
| MockingSnitch chapter 6 . 7/5/2012
Wow! Update soon?(: it's very good nd kinda addicting!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I'm sure it might have been a good story, I just couldn't read it through. There were simply way too many spelling and/or grammatical errors to be worth my time.
| dreamlesswinter chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
please update soon! i love it :)