|Reviews for To Make an Heiress|
| boagarota chapter 6 . 6/6/2010
Miss, I'm loving every line of your fic. It is entirely quotable - and I am indeed quoting it for a friend on my messenger from time to time. I'm LMAOL here, and I thank you for that. I'm not someone to read this kind of cliche'd fiction (as you yourself has stated in the first chapter), but this is awesome.
Tell me, did you base it on any particular movie/series/etc.?
Looking forward to more chapter soon!
| shadow of the lost chapter 6 . 5/31/2010
LOL! i can't wait to see how this turns out!
| Darth-Taisha chapter 6 . 5/30/2010
The man had a humiliation compass. It was official. LOL. I love this story, I sure hope you finish it. Pretty please. I love your Itachi, he is delicious!
| Azaeilia chapter 6 . 5/29/2010
lol This is great! I love the intense plot. Please update soon! :D
| LoireLoa chapter 6 . 5/27/2010
The butler did it. Or if he didn't, he knows who did. Although why Hinanta didn't simply call her sister and ask what she was up to, I don't know. And then tell her sister that her and Itachi were leaving Argent to go elsewhere (desert?).
| fhclause chapter 6 . 5/18/2010
I love the way you write. Intricate, yet smooth. And you make the characters sounds cunning.. v
Still the mystery remains... what dud Hanabi plan?
Update again please!
| Elizabeth Fae chapter 6 . 5/15/2010
Interesting charater depictions and setting. An over idealisation for Itachi. An interesting storyline, although go easy on the info dumps. Considering all that, you actually protrayed it fairly well. Good work.
| Poche chapter 6 . 5/8/2010
This is an amazing story! I'm really looking forward for the next chapter .
| CynthiAngel chapter 6 . 5/1/2010
i LOVEE this story! pwease update soon? and also, make this story an itahina perhaps? :]
| CryInDownpour chapter 6 . 4/21/2010
OH! I wonder what is going to happen! Fantastic job! Hilarious scenes and wonderful writing! I love it! ;D
| lupina24 chapter 6 . 4/17/2010
ok, quite bluntly, I love this story. A lot. Please tell me you plan to continue soon? Itachi is quite a character and you nail Hinata beautifully.
| anon chapter 6 . 4/17/2010
wah a cliffhanger! i am very curious to see what will happen; i'm sure hinata will somehow manage. i thought the scene of hinata and the waiter was funny. i'm really liking how this story is progressing. i also think that the characterizations are pretty close to canon. thanks for sharing and looking forward to the next chapter!
as for requests:
a humorous love triangle between hinata and any combo of itachi, sasuke, kakashi, or gaara (all 4 boys is a-ok too!). cookies if there are mentions of neji/hanabi/kiba/shino helping the guy they think is worthy of hinata.
or hinata running into any of the mentioned guys at a comic/anime con cos-playing as their favorite character. fanboy-ism commences. double points if fanboy is cosplaying with a guy friend, and in order to get hinata's kiss/photograph, the guy has to show some yaoi love since hinata is a big fan. thank you very much. :D
| sasuhinaneji chapter 6 . 4/17/2010
This is so awesome!Very about everyone is in character! I really,really,really love it.I can just see it playing my mind as a movieYou're starting to make Itahina one of my main OTPs
I really hope to see the next chapter soon!:D
| Light86 chapter 6 . 4/17/2010
oh god, oh god, please update soon, i need moree pleasse lolz
| RaawrImaDinosaur chapter 6 . 4/16/2010
oh this is getting interesting! Please update ASAP! :)