|Reviews for The Art of Falling|
| Optimist Prime chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I always enjoy hearing things from a different perspective, and I like how you interpret Hatter's thoughts. Especially the 'stupid vs. brave' thing, because my opinions on Alice's actions are still conflicted in that regard.
As for criticism, I'd say just be careful on your grammar. Maybe once you finish writing, give it a little time before you proofread so that you can refresh your brain, and then once everything's fixed, post it on up. Anyway, do keep going, I quite like it and would gladly read more. Good luck! Cheers~
| linzhatterxx chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Oh... my... Catapillar!
This is FANTASTIC. I demand you add more and feed everyone's Hatter addiction! (Which is quite rampant in my case, if no one noticed. x])