Reviews for Unfair
Halen Catice chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
I love this. I love you. All of your stories are always so powerful and moving. Thank you so much for touching on this tragic, despicable, awful event. Thank you for being able to take on Roy's voice so well. Thank you for writing this. Thanks.
momiji-k chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Oh poor Roy! I just can't put into words how things feel in this case... but you've done a terrific job getting into his head and these are all the things I could imagine but couldn't think of that must be going on... all that and much more than I even thought about.

I feel a little cold now, like I'm down there in the dark with him... you always do such a fantastic job pulling me into the story!
great gospel chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
Captured Roy's situation perfectly. Excellent job. (Same thing was running through my mind while reading 102! D:)

soni13 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
Oh poor Roy! You did a good job of capturing his stream of conciousness and his feelings of desperation.
ewasnow chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Love the last sentence!