|Reviews for Lap Dog|
| Haruhana chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
Congratulations, you wrote porn about kids. What the fuck is wrong with you? I hope one day you'll read this again, realize how sick it is and delete it. Seriously, this is something a pedophile would write. How can you fantasize about a SIX year old kid in a sexual context? To the other reviewers who think that this story is sexy: you're just as pathetic as she is. You can't be serious.
I hope none of you will ever have children.
| BlackMagicRose7 chapter 2 . 5/12/2014
This was a good short story!
| queenyaoiawsome1 chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
that was hot and funny
| Yaoilover1235 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Lol there should be more storied like this _ this was great
| inu382 chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
I wish you would rewrite this because I feel like you could do a better job; I feel the sequel proves me right. This story began interestingly enough, but the gap at the end between the talk with Inutaisho and the boys leaving a closet or whatever leaves one hanging. I enjoyed the interaction between father and sons and I especially appreciate how truthful you are to the awkwardness of talking to a son who is gay and is definitely interested in his brother. I realize this was written a while ago and you're probably much better at developing stories and descriptions, but the Inuyasha ones were the only stories wherein I know the characters and can make some sort of quasi-accurate assessment. As a one shot, it's entertaining and cute, it didn't drag on and bore, but its predictable. Your sequel showed your abilities more and it was more entertaining to read. Also, thank you for your review on Bromance-I decided to repay the favor because it's not often I find a boy reviewing of my stories and you seem like a genuinely interesting person. Good luck with your writing.
| PrincessDemon007 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
I cried from laughter when shessy got in troblem with the father plz
| Sev'slittlesecret chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
This was so cute! - I loved it!
| In The Mix chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I think it's cute! Please let me know if you're doing a sequel!
| literatetaurine chapter 2 . 9/8/2010
this was weird...but sesshomaru...gay? i laughed pretty loud at that
| brz chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I thought it was absolutely interesting to say the least and very good and I'm looking forward to the sequel very much
| niceladysakura chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
i love it, please update soon
innocent inuyasha...this chapter makes me laugh C:
| G-dot chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
I like this. :D
I think it's SessInu. SemeUke. Because, I'm only comfortable in shifting when the story could be fully developed. Anyway...
This was short and cute. A sequel would be nice. :D Inuyasha here so reminds me of Sasuke and the same goes for his aniki as Itachi. Man... what is it with me and incest? Inuyasha is so lovable that I really wonder why people treat him like shit in the anime. Sesshomaru needs to get it straight that he is not. :D LOL
This is one of the most loose and ridiculously unmeticulous reviews I have ever passed but your writing puts me in ease which is not a small feat.
| alyuchiha913 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
OMG that was so funny! Shame on Sesshoumaru! LOL! Cool fic!
Peace Out! _
| Inu-Ice-Dragon chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Such a cute story! I love it. I think a sequel would be fantastic. Thank you for this story!
| lil joker 1989 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
] its cute and kind of funny