|Reviews for Innocent Eyes|
| HMP chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
Awwee, it was soo fluffy 3 Now all we need is a story for Mokuba and Ryou! *hint, hint, wink, wink*
| bostafu chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Omg poor yami!
| ImmortalAngel92 chapter 15 . 9/1/2011
Angel: I just finished reading both the fic and...
Bakura: Angel you have serious problems.
Angel: And you are scared of a guy who sings...
Bakura: Don't even talk about him.
Angel: Anyway, *glares at Bakura* The fics were great!
Bakura: Shouldn't you hate this one because Yugi's with me?
Bakura: You don't hate me even more because of this do you? *looking worried at the calm expression on her face*
Angel: I don't hate you! *glomps him* I just love annoying you!
Bakura: Get off me! *pushes Angel off and runs*
Angel: Since you probably don't know much about...
Atem: She kidnapped the most of us and Bakura's been trying to kill her ever since and she has been torturing him with the stuff she reads. Deep down he's like her fourht or fifth favourite character but don't tell him that.
Angel: You couldn't resist could you?
Atem: *shrugs* I've been in your other reviews today.
| Spindlegal chapter 15 . 4/3/2011
i freaking LOVE bakura in this story! He is so cute!
Same with Marik! I feel bad for him, but i just wanna squeeze the life out of him with a big hug!
As for Yugi, well, this was one of my favorite yugi's in any of the stories i've read. haha his penguin...
Yami/Seto couple umm im not really a big fan of but since they werent the mainly focused couple then i thought it was good :D
ryou/mokuba- HAHAHA so cute...
| KOffe chapter 15 . 3/10/2011
OKay to start off I loved your story it was very good, no better it was great. I think you have a good ability to write lemons, which takes true talent. I like the storyline, I had to read it twice to fully understand what was happing, but none the less it was good. i THINK YOU NEED TO WORK ON ADDING SOME FILLER THOUGH. i HAVEN'T READ ANY OF YOUR OTHER WORKS, BUT AFTER THIS i WILL. (sorry about the cap lock). My only negative thing to say about your story was your potrayal of a bipolar/ schizophrenia person, it would be near impossible for a psychiatrist to diagnosis someone with both schizophrenia and bipolar disorder, because the symptoms of both disorders are too similar. Most people think bipolar persons only have mood swings, however when they are experiencing high mania or mixed cycling they can go into something called psychosis which is the same thing schitzo people go into. Schitzo people can also experience mood swngs just not as severe as a bipolar type 1. The only reason I know all this is because when I was about 15 I was misdiagnosed with schizophrenia and was rediagnosed at 17 with bipolar type 1. overall with the exception of marik's potrayal I overall liked your story.
| Helen chapter 10 . 2/1/2011
You and your awesomely amazing overly emotional stories making me cry! You know it's a good story when it brings you to tears! Keep it up !
| ThisAccountIsNoLongerUnderUse chapter 12 . 1/6/2011
I'm now jealous of Seto's family x.x
I want to be able to sit in the same room as my (EVIL!)stepfather and not feel the same way a rabbit does when a fox is nearby.
Damn, I love Bakura! he is so smexy! (Seto is too!)
I can't stop laughing about Seto's mum, she is just too funny.
Btw you're a good writer and this is a really good story.
| Adam-1D chapter 15 . 12/29/2010
I love it. And I love you for posting it! Yay them! Yuugi and Bakura are so cute together! Especially 'Kura when he's being all sensitive with Yuugi!
| looptheloopy chapter 15 . 12/25/2010
Aww! That was awesome! Oh I love how you portray Balura :) And I now hate Yami's mother :D LOL!
| xXxAshannahxXx chapter 15 . 11/29/2010
Aww, this was such a good fic. I sat down and read it in one sitting! I read New Beginnings too. I know, I feel like a shmuck cuz I didn't really comment -dodges scrabble pieces thrown at her-
Usually first-person confuses the hell outta me, but this story really wasn't that confusing. And I absolutely loved reading Bakura's POV! Are you still planning on writing Mokuba and Ryou's story?
| soundofmadness223 chapter 13 . 1/20/2010
just thought i'd say...the first paragraph is my favorite. hands down. ryou mokubavery, very cute.
| siarafaerie-101-miss chapter 9 . 1/14/2010
I really love the bakuyugi-ness in the fic! can you give yugi a near death expierance? i really love them in yugioh fics!
update again soon?
p.s did that all just sound hyper to you too?
| Eightian chapter 9 . 1/12/2010
Rotfl! Bakura really CAN'T comfort people can he? anyways, love the story cant wait for the next update!
| tinkletimekelly chapter 9 . 1/12/2010
Awe! Good chapter!
| Eightian chapter 8 . 1/5/2010
AW! Cute Bakura! love it! update soon please!