Reviews for bites me for the love i give
lola chapter 1 . 8/2
that is damn good you are very good writter
anonymous chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
made me sob
susannahblack19 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
This is really good!
samia1381 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
absolutely mind blowing! beautiful
PhantomHeiress chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Holy crap... Those last two lines are chilling. Skins up my spine. Woah. Devdaas was one of my favorite SRK movies. Beautiful.
D.D.B chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Very nice. Atmospheric and dreamy, just like the movie...and with such a bittersweet ending.

It got a *little* confusing in the middle, but I definitely got such a strong mood and feeling out of it that I don't mind.

(Afer re-reading, I see that there are some double negatives which confused me: i.e., "didn't not include him". But that's easily fixed if you wanted to fix it.)

Great job! Yes, the movie was sad, but I would recommend it to anyone! (One of my first Bollywood movies, and the first SRK movie I saw.
susi2010 chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
the theme for this was incredible. very deep and touching, especially the last two lines. the movie was great! u should write more
no one of consequence chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Lovely. This movie is soo sad.

Would you ever write more?
Anita chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Those last two lines are chilling. Wonderful!