|Reviews for The Cullen Girl|
| parkesy23 chapter 11 . 5/4/2013
| Wont2nach chapter 24 . 5/4/2013
| parkesy23 chapter 10 . 5/4/2013
Great chapter thanks
| parkesy23 chapter 9 . 5/4/2013
| Anabely chapter 24 . 5/4/2013
Well Edward just lost his girlfriend. I don't see Emmett or Jasper letting him near her now.
I really liked Rosalie in this chapter. You did a good job modifying her opinions and personality to fit the slightly different situation.
| parkesy23 chapter 8 . 5/4/2013
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| parkesy23 chapter 5 . 5/4/2013
well it worked lol
| parkesy23 chapter 4 . 5/4/2013
| Rachel chapter 24 . 5/2/2013
Omg! You can't stop there! I hope bella and jasper get together. Can wait :)
| parkesy23 chapter 3 . 5/4/2013
Loving it thanks
| parkesy23 chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
sounds very interesting, look forward to reading thanks
| tu-tu 2 chapter 24 . 5/3/2013
Don't stop now. I gotta know what happens next.
| Daisy Grace chapter 24 . 5/3/2013
So, I see in the summary that there is no couple pairing listed - just the character Bella. Sooooo, I'm assuming this story is going to be an Edward versus Jasper story vying for a relationship with Bella. Or she has a human companion - normal human life and dies. Her life story, so-to-speak.
Right now I have more affection for Edward. I don't think his "family" is being fair to him. In fact, I find their attitudes to be disloyal.
Has the members of this family thought about what their end role will be regarding Bella's life? I mean, do they want to witness her to age and eventually die? Is this their preference for her? It seems very weird that they haven't thought about what her future will be like - not just for Bella's sake - but also for the sake of the family.
And Bella, seems very naive about herself as well. Did she think that as a human she could have a normal relationship with a vampire like she would with another human? If you love someone, it means naturally that you would want to never be parted from them. Yet, if Bella remains human, she will be and the vampire she loves will be faced with an eternal existence without her. What happened to Rose is unfortunate since her choice would have been to have never become a vampire but that doesn't give her the right to make a choice or judge Bella. Not only are their circumstances different but as individuals, these young women are completely different from one another.
Also, I can't remember (since I read the beginning of this story aeons ago) - is their a Volturi in this fic? Is the the law about keeping the existence of vampires a secret the same as canon in this story? If so, I would think even "adopting" a human child like the Cullens did in Bella's case, would be a problem let alone a vampire/human romantic relationship.