Reviews for The Cullen Girl
Anon chapter 26 . 8/3/2014
Hi I've just finished your story and it was awesome. The only thing I'm really confused about is that I thought the whole point if Bella living with them was that he either became a Cullen or was killed by the volturi? I love jasper and Rosalie in this one. Sticking to character but more real I think.
TwilightChangedMyLife chapter 26 . 7/28/2014
Bella's destiny changed the moment her parents were killed by vampires. Becoming a vampire would have been a part of a 'natural' progressive pattern based on the resulting choices left. If she didn't want to become one, she wouldn't have become so integrated into the vampire family. The idealistic human life is an illusion we're taught to believe, like a program. It is a version of what life could be, one that is likely to produce success and more humans. Just because someone doesn't follow this course in life doesn't make it an 'unnatural' human life, just merely a different pattern than the one we are programmed to follow.
Rosalie was so stuck on that ideal pattern because of the high ideals taught during her upbringing.

I SO enjoyed reading this story! I must say that I don't usually like epilogues, but this one was actually bearable because it contained a point.
barbiedoll123 chapter 7 . 7/9/2014
They all knew
barbiedoll123 chapter 6 . 7/9/2014
Yes it would
barbiedoll123 chapter 5 . 7/9/2014
I'm glad they made her move
barbiedoll123 chapter 4 . 7/9/2014
Poor Bella. Shes lost everything
barbiedoll123 chapter 3 . 7/9/2014
Yay fighting like brothers do
barbiedoll123 chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
Im glad he picked her up
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Poor Bella
BridieM chapter 26 . 5/2/2014
Thanks. Really enjoyed this story. :D
BridieM chapter 9 . 5/2/2014
I lost this story! And I didn't realise! Duh! Silly me. It was only when I received a reply from you to one of my reviews that I went looking for it. Don't know how. Don't know why. But lost it was... But thank you for the reminder. :D I had to do a quick revision to get me back on track. This is an excellent chapter. Gotta love them all. Especially Emmett. ;) The characters all have layers and individual voices. A joy to read. Thank you. :D
X.summergrey.X chapter 26 . 4/8/2014
I did not see this ending. and no alice to be seen. either way it was a good story.
X.summergrey.X chapter 13 . 4/8/2014
oh I wonder if rose will join them. that prom will be the time when Royce acts horribly to her that makes her being changed.
X.summergrey.X chapter 9 . 4/7/2014
I find it odd that Edward seemed so clueless about a female body. he did take medical classes and is around human women a lot through out school.
X.summergrey.X chapter 7 . 4/7/2014
lol. first period is always so awkward and embarrassing and then add vampires to the mix. poor bella.
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