|Reviews for The Return of the Heir|
| Rat-Man chapter 16 . 2/7
Very nice! Well done on "The Lost One" and "The Return of the Heir"! Bravo!
| kjate95 chapter 16 . 1/5
Loved boy your stories, couldn't put them down and stayed up to the early hours of the morning reading them! Brilliant plot with lots of unexpected twists as well as some mega angst and cuteness! Thanks for the fabulous read :D
| CorruptEnlightenment chapter 16 . 12/16/2013
I really liked your characterizations. You managed to evolve the characters while still keeping them relatively in character. Well done, and thank you for sharing.
| SmilingArtist chapter 16 . 12/6/2013
I would just like to say that I enjoy ALL your ItaSaku fics so much. The Return of the Heir is no exception.
You're my favorite ItaSaku author. I've probably re-read your fics so many times I've lost count.
It's been a while since you've last posted anything.
Have you ever considered time-travel ItaSaku fics? I've read a lot of them and could only wonder what your version of a time-travel fic would turn out to be like.
Hope to see more multi-chapter ItaSaku fics from you in the future! I'll be waiting patiently.
| haliz chapter 4 . 11/2/2013
I love ALMOST all your stories!, and I say almost because of two things; first is that I haven't read them all haha; and second, is that I don't like this story, sorry to say that. It's just that the prerquel was beautiful and Itachi, was into character and now he is not he is not the mocking type he is quite serious, I know he laughs and he is sweet and he likes to tease sakura but in a seriousa manner not like you portrait him in here. I seriously like to keep Itachi as you described him in "the lost one". And I will stop reading this sequel because I just don't like him nor the way he speaks to her and I dont either how sakura seems to be behaving like a petulant child, I mean she reacted so human and natural at the end of the lost one, afraid that itachi will kill sasuke because she didnt know and still doesnt know a thing about the masacre but still it seems to forced and not genuine her character in this story. I fell in love with itachi in the lost one and know i dot like him. Please dont be abset by this humble opinion. I am aware that you have amazing writing skills and that you portrait kishimotos characters with their emotions intact, I have read several of your stories and have left my reviews apprasing your work because you deligth me with every word you write. Please take this review as the words of one of your fans that just loves when tou write a sasuke or an itahci or a sakura into character as you ussually do. Well that would be all and I will keep reading the rest of your stories. You will know of me in the next hours. Bye
| The drummer chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Hey, I've read your story The lost one and all of this one. They are good. In the beginning this story felt young compared to the prequel, but it turned out good
| Dailey Jannet chapter 10 . 10/22/2013
I AM SOOOOOOO OGLAD THAT GAARA IS NOT THE FATHER! VERY VERY RELIEVED!
| red.masenko chapter 12 . 9/27/2013
Thank god! I was waiting for that since the introduction of Ryo!
| silverwolfigther00 chapter 16 . 9/20/2013
Wow, this is just...wow, im just soo glad that this was complete before i found the story, if not i would have been jumping around screaming for a new chapter. this is a really good story and i really enjoyed to read it. I most sertanly belive I am going to re- read it many times later.
| kyoko minion chapter 4 . 9/12/2013
| kimba93 chapter 16 . 7/28/2013
As usual great story :) I do feel like maybe you could have gone into more detail about a few things, but then I suppose you'd be writing this forever
| sjcrown3 chapter 16 . 7/13/2013
Marvelous, everything was wrapped up nicely! :)
| fanffic reader chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
beautiful story, really a piece of art
| SakuraHimeYoi chapter 16 . 4/10/2013
| Beautiful-Tyrant77 chapter 10 . 2/22/2013
Damn I think I just had my first heart break. My chest was hurting and tears just let themselves out. Just playing but it is sad that Itachi told her those words. I love your story, the characters seem so real and I love that about your story.