Reviews for The Return of the Heir
kazuyaryo chapter 16 . 2/15
That was an amazing story.
lanternanonimo chapter 16 . 8/12/2023
Amazing! I love it!
Thanks for sharing!
Marnie chapter 16 . 2/12/2023
I love how you wrote this story so much. I binged all 150k words in one day! I’m so happy with the solution to where they should live, because that’s one of the most difficult quandaries I’ve ever come across. I’m glad they’re staying in Suna with Gaara and the others. It’s the best choice for them.
Also, I just wanted to say… thanks for writing this story. I’ll check out your other works, though it seems you’re not as active as you used to be, if at all, and this fic was released around ten whole years ago.
But thank you for taking us on this wonderful journey.
Marnie chapter 15 . 2/12/2023
This story is just so fascinating so far. I’m excited to see how it wraps up, but sad, too. Thank you for this journey you’ve taken us on, author.
Marnie chapter 14 . 2/12/2023
Oh no, poor Ryo! I wonder if hat happened? I bet Kenji kidnapped him. I’m very pleased I discovered this story when it was completed so I could properly enjoy it.
Marnie chapter 13 . 2/12/2023
No way we’re overdosing on the fluff. I love it. It’s even better since it’s tastefully so sparingly scattered through the text.
Marnie chapter 12 . 2/12/2023
You keep on leaving us on cliffhangers, it’s crazy. I wanna know what happens next!
It would have been best if Sakura had told Itachi without Ryo there first. But what’s done is done.
Marnie chapter 11 . 2/12/2023
What a development! This clears so many things up. I normally HATE Sakura-centric stories, but this one made her into a beautiful character. It’s going to be so interesting now that she knows Sasuke’s true motives. Honestly, it’s horrible to believe Sasuke would do something like that. But with all the pain he’s underfed, and the kind of person it is, it’s very likely. Itachi’s always been so self-sacrificing and selfless, he’s actually the perfect match for Sakura, even though he’s so stoic and gruff and she’s so sweet and expressive. They complement each other.
Marnie chapter 10 . 2/12/2023
This was such an amazing chapter! Itachi and Sakura make quite the pair. But for some reason, I don’t want Ryo leaving Suna. He belongs there more than he does in Konoha. Poor Gaara, losing the boy he views as his son.
Marnie chapter 9 . 2/12/2023
This so very thrilling so far—but who is Ryo’s father? The interaction between Ryo, Sakura, and Itachi is one I’m eager to see. I’ve been awaiting it for a while.
Marnie chapter 8 . 2/12/2023
WHAT A CLIFFHANGER.
I’m speechless—wow—Is Ryo Sakura’s?
Marnie chapter 7 . 2/12/2023
This fic is just so interesting, I love it a lot. I can’t find one thing to dislike, really, besides the fact that Itachi is too pushy in his advances.
Marnie chapter 6 . 2/12/2023
Oh, no… now that Kalashi knows, things are gonna get crazy. It’s wild about Itachi and Sakura being together. They’re obviously endgame, but I don’t know how I truly feel about them being together.
Marnie chapter 5 . 2/12/2023
COUSIN?!
That explains SO MUCH!
Marnie chapter 4 . 2/12/2023
This is hilarious. I love Sakura playing Itachi.
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