| Reviews for The Return of the Heir |
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   purpleshinigami chapter 4 . 1/30/2010 I am guessing Ryo is TOTALLY her son with Itachi! At least that is where my brain is taking me. After all there are a few years missing form her records... |
| The Reveiwer known as Name chapter 4 . 1/30/2010 Excellent Chapter! |
| Not Important chapter 3 . 1/25/2010 I LOVE your story and I REALLY REALLY REALLY HOPE you can UPDATE SOON! THANK YOU! |
| Uruviel Elensar chapter 3 . 1/23/2010 Awesomeness. I loved Itachi's point of view in this chapter. However, there were some points that I wished you would offer further description. "Her entire form stiffened" and "her body tensed further". These seem too vague to me. How did her body stiffen? How did her body tense further? I think it would add more to the impact to your story if you added more detail to parts like this. You have a great story here in almost every aspect, but I think that your story lacks description. Stories, I believe, should engage all the senses. And there is a lack of detail here regarding what the characters see (i.e. scenery), smell, taste, etc. In any case, you have me hooked. You really are great at creating believable characters and situations. I am awed at your creative and writing abilities. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
| GreekLia chapter 3 . 1/23/2010 AW so cute! I love it so far! update soon :) |
| Living Nemesis chapter 3 . 1/21/2010 This is excellent. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work :) |
| saku-chan chapter 3 . 1/21/2010 ...I already miss your updates...for how long are planing to keep us boil? please...hurry up...it's a great story with a remarcable idea and...i wanna know what Sakura would say...i hope it will be an YES! |
| Okadiah chapter 3 . 1/18/2010 Lol, excellent use of the cliff hanger and i love the story line. Please update soon! |
| Little Kunai chapter 2 . 1/17/2010 awesome story! but which one is the prequel to this story? |
| JoRyuken chapter 3 . 1/16/2010 not sure if you knew this, but "taishou" is spelled with a c and not an s. |
| midnight000shadow chapter 3 . 1/15/2010 O.O so god! haha i love how ur wrting this story, like with the glimpses into their past and how ur slowly revealing stuff. ah so god! more updates! please! ps. ryo...hm...i get the feeling...he isnt her lover or anything...maybe...MAYBE...someone related to...itachi? ahahaha im so excited! |
| KaT stah chapter 3 . 1/15/2010 This story is so good! This was a great chapter and you had to end it with a cliffie! Please update soon! |
| DeeaE chapter 3 . 1/15/2010 And damn cliffy! I wanted to know what sakura wiill say! |
| KaT stah chapter 2 . 1/15/2010 I love this story and I love this ANBU leader Itachi! |
| KaT stah chapter 1 . 1/15/2010 Ha I can tell that this story is going to be good! All of your stories are though. I have a question, if this is the sequel to The Lost One then does this story contain spoilers? |