Reviews for The Return of the Heir |
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![]() ![]() so great! I like it a lot...but what am I saying...I don't like it...I LOVE IT! as usual you impressed me with your update and...I can't wait the update...ALREADY...so great job and UPDATE:X |
![]() ![]() another amazing chapter! both stories are so good! i love how you have them going at the same time, it's interesting when you reveal bits of lost one and link it to the return of the heir, ie Itsuki asking Sakura to spar last chapter. Makes me all the more excited to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! Okay, list of what I like! 1. I loved how you kept the charaters completely in charater! Itachi is still Itachi, and even though he is showing emotions towards Sakura, he still keeps his "mask" in tact. (except I know Kakashi can see right through it!) 2. I adore how you took the time to make your chapters so long. The second most annoying thing to me, is when the chapters are so short that it makes me press that little blue back button in the corner. Your story kept my eyes glued to the screen! 3. I can tell that you go through your stories. A lot of writers (such as myself) have that urge to instantly post their story without even looking back for spelling errors and all that Jazz. 4. You're keeping the story going, and you know exactly where the chapter should come to it's end. I can't wait to see what Sakura says in response! You have a wonderful gift for writing. The only advice I have is to update soon! :3 If you need any help with anything (though I'm sure you have better people in higher places for it) I will be more than happy to assist you. Maybe as a common readers POV. Anyways, You'll hear from me again when your next chapter comes out! - Boats |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! you make me melt with joy. 3 Love the focus on Itachi and Sakura. The twist with his other identity and the indication of their past. you just know how to do it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! Damn cliffies! One of these days, I'm going to end up falling off the edge and breaking every bone in my body. You really should put a disclaimer up that you wont cover our medical bills when we fall off from cliffies if they happen to be from your stories lol Loving this by the way. Your writing is totally amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very intense battle between Itachi and Sakura. Heh, it was amusing to watch the two of them go at it. Even more so surprising that Sakura nearly managed to beat Itachi with a surprise attack by fooling him into thinking she was the clone. Very nice moments between those two as well. I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can't wait for the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man so the lost one is in progress right? and this is the sequel? thats truly awesome, to write both at the same time. because with this one your hiding very many facts about the lost one. so dancing around subjects that have not yet been reveled in the plot. it must be quite an enjoyable task to figure out how to fit it all together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, i see now. so this is the sequel to the other story. ah, okkie then. wow, that took me by surprise, i hadn't thought to even consider it because it was not finished. well, a great chapter as always. keep writing and updating. :} p.s. the last question of the chapter made me laugh at the irony of it all. i never imagined him to be so open, that was a nice surprise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I can't figure it out...which other story is this connected to? I've re-read almost all of your stories and I can't find the link...arg! It's driving me crazy! By the way...I love this story! It makes me really want to read what happened to them 6 years ago but I can't find the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliff Hanger! Intense chapter which made it all the more enjoyable |
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![]() ![]() This didn't have any lemon and it was amazing. I really enjoyed it. Please if you have time I and all your other readers would enjoy a sequel to this. The entire story was boss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, what an awesome way to end this chapter. Now we're all gonna be wanting to know her answer and eagerly awaiting the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that is mean! You need to finish the lost one! too many teasers! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting cliff hanger... A little cliché, but awesome. :) Will Sakura be too proud (and dumb -.-), and say no? Or will she be romantic (and a little dumb, naive and easy to control) and say yes? Or will she be a real feminist and say something like, "no way in Hell," then beat him up, and then kiss him? (Just my speculations - don't answer them...) The part where Itachi and Sakura were fighting was really cool, and written very convincing! Thumbs up for that! I am merely here for Itachi, but I like your Sakura, she's cool! See you 'round. ~HoloXam |