Reviews for The Return of the Heir
satoshii chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
I'm somewhat confused. I don't know if this story is connected with the other one you're updating!

Maybe you should have used a different name?

As always, you've done great work! Thanks for sharing!
lazy-cranes chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
ahahahhahaha. I would just like Sakura to respond to that question with a simple. Fuck off. :)
Autumn's Wind chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
I particularly liked the ending. It was so romantic...8-

Update soon please.
Runendf chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
Oh, Sakura~ So stubborn!

Looking forward to more, thanks for the update!
Blackrose74 chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
O_O

OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Delicate Desires chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
Amazing chapter! I got a little confused with the Shinjutama and the Itsuki thing, though- is this some kind of spin-off from The Lost One? I didn't remember seeing anything that mentioned that. Anyhow, this was so nicely written! (: I really can't wait for the next chapter. I love its length, and I'm excited to see how Sakura will respond!
Sariasprincy chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
Go Itachi! Sakura had such a good strategy and she even hit Itachi! That's girl power right there haha

Good job. I really liked this chapter! But I am wondering who Ryo is. Is he Sakura's boyfriend or something because you kind of worded it like he was, but I'm not entirely sure. I don't know if you want to explain that in later chapters or something.

But anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon!
ohsowitchy chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
The suspense! This cliffhanger is killing me!
cc chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
You seriously have THE most frusrtating cliff-hangers! Loved it though, : )
angel-tears-16 chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
This story is like a drug. If you updated every day it would not be fast enough. There is a great amount of planning that I can see goes into every chapter, and a technique that is almost flawless. I really hope to see an update from you soon.
Lifestyle chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
wow, I didn't even realize until this chapter that this is like a somewhat-continuation of "The Lost One". (I think?). It'll be interesting to read the Lost One now that we know a little bit about what's going to happen :)

I'll be looking forward to your updates!
cloudsallaround chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
I THOUGHT SO. This is a sequel to the Lost One, right? Very smart, writing them at the same time.. :D
minniemousemom chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
great great update
Inner-me-is-chaos chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
... I just so want to scream you for letting us hanging there... Cliffy I don't believe it... but I just can't because of the good chapter before the bad, bad cliffy XD

Great job as ever ;)

Imic
Blueberry Babe chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
very nice. can't wait to see what happens next.. thanks.
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