| Reviews for The Return of the Heir |
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   Isaha chapter 2 . 1/6/2010 And again I fall in love with one of your stories. |
| cherryjubilee chapter 2 . 1/5/2010 Ah, loved it... so much suspense... you really are one of the best ItaSaku writers out there |
| Regin chapter 2 . 1/4/2010 I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon! |
| Not Important chapter 2 . 1/4/2010 I LOVE your story and the way it is heading and am DIEING to know what will happen next! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THANK YOU! |
| Illidan the Half Demon chapter 2 . 1/4/2010 Heh, poor Naruto and Sakura. Things seem to get more and more complicated for teh two of them. I figured Naruto would be the one to do something irrational with Itachi as captain, but it seems he did do one good thing in the first exercise, though the second was just his temper getting the better of him, yet again, lol. Fun fun, Sakura vs. Itachi. That should be interesting, hehe. Excellent work on this chapter! |
| Itaweasel-hime chapter 2 . 1/3/2010 Ah! I want to know what happens next! What was Itachi telling Naruto? Please update soon! :D |
| Lady Lathenia chapter 2 . 1/3/2010 Hi! Nice chapter. When I saw that you update I was really happy! I want to know what Itachi told to Naruto to make him behave in that calm and sad way... And of course I want to know more about Itachi and Sakura, and how was the relationship between them years ago when they met in "The lost one". Well, I hope that you had a very good time with your family on christmas and in the new year. See you and congratulations! |
| midnight000shadow chapter 2 . 1/1/2010 dude i love it ] UPDATES! |
| BootleggerBea chapter 2 . 1/1/2010 This is such a good start to a story. I've read a few others of yours, and you're such a good writer. You're very good at setting up a situation that's unique, and I love the way you really define your characters. From what I can tell, they've always been very consistent and believable. Keep writing, and update soon! P.S. I love sadism. Sadist Itachi is one of my favorite things. |
| Dionysos chapter 2 . 1/1/2010 I'm curious to find out what happened between Itachi and Sakura and what will happen in the future |
| Lost to the Hoping chapter 2 . 1/1/2010 I await the next chapter anxiously. -tsv |
| ohsowitchy chapter 2 . 1/1/2010 I love this story so far! The character development is really nice :) |
| Blueberry Babe chapter 2 . 1/1/2010 can't wait |
| gymgurl520 chapter 2 . 1/1/2010 Very good. keep going. whats going to happen next? Update very soon. |
| saku-chan93 chapter 2 . 12/31/2009 wow...I must admit that the sparring part was a little predictable, to me at least...that would've been my choice too and it would've been a shame if that wouldn't happen. anyway, I didn't notice grammar errors which is really good, the idea is great, to be honest I would've never expect for Itachi to return as the ANBU captain, even if I'll have to repet my self you have great ideas! keep on the great work and I want to see the next soon. |