Reviews for The Return of the Heir |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVELY! I loved this part so much and it was well written! THANK YOU :D and i seriously can't wait for the next chapter :P good luck and haooy new years! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. XD God, way to put Sakura in the crappiest situation EVER! XD Nonetheless, good chapter! :D Please update soon! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great read so far. I really like your stories, they are really well thought out and have nice detail without being tedious. Can't wait to see more. Thanks for all your hard work. |
![]() ![]() I am loving this story! The tension between them is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok. I have to say this. You are a great writer. you really are. I love all of your stories... at least most of them ;) But in this particular story Itachi is such a bastard I feel like hitting him on the head and punching him in the balls. Seriously. I'll hang around for the next chapter to see if Sakura kicks his ass or something. Or at least burns him verbally. Damnit. I'm off to go read some fluff to lighten my mood :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, that hit the spot. after eating a platter of chocolate chip cookies and reading this chapter, i am throuly satisfied and sleepy enough to pass out. i am nt quite sure how i feel about kakashi being the hokage, sometimes it just rubs me the wrong way, but what the heck, its time to get out of the boring normal-cy that has settled over this fandom. i see that naruto stays true to his bonds with sasuke, but i sure hope that he would see itchi for the person that he is, or your create him as, that is. what i really liked about this chapter is the conversation of kakashi and itachi in the trees. it doesnt seem that itachi cares about konoha( well he obviously cares, DUH to me, but cares...you know what i mean, lol), i like the way that you made him fixated on sakura. i obviously cannot explain what goes on in my head at this moment, but i just get the feeling that he knows that sakura will understand him more so than any other person out there, and that is what makes me giddy about reading this story. i have a hunch about what happened to those six ANBU that he dismissed, but i wonder if the same happened to naruto... cant wait for the next chapter, like always, i shall urge you to update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Sai's also going to be training with Itachi? This chapter is awesome! Please update soon! -Setsuna |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ XD Huge grin on my face right now. Feel sorry for what happened to Naruto but I'm excited to see how the next chapter goes! Happy Holidays~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() To say that I'm curious about where this is heading is an understatement. I can't wait for the spar and for the mysteries of their past relationship to be revealed. I'm loving the suspense. Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sniffs* poor naru...damn itachi can be cruel lol well can't wait till u update to c what kind of hell he puts sakura through lol please update soon! - |
![]() ![]() very very exciting. Please update as soon as humanly possible. Uchiha speed, my dear, Uchiha speed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() At the same time, she wanted march straight up to him - wanted to march? And if she had learnt anything about Itachi in the time they had spent together, he never did anything unless there was something in it for himself. A small voice at the back of her mind nudged at her, whispering that that was not strictly true. - Wah XD Can't wait until we get to read more of their backstory! I admire your organizational skills, running these stories simultaneously! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3 how cute! I'm just confused...is this a sequel? I'm just curious, I don't know their history. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh kick his butt Sakura -chan :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh good story! update soon please! |