DANG. What an entrance! My mouth is sore from being opened too long! Hahah, you're amazing, really!

Aww... That was a good story. I just love happy endings. Of course, it's a little sad that Sakura couldn't really remain in Konoha, but it's not bad that they moved to Suna, either. Especially considering Ryo and Itachi. I also enjoyed the ample dosage of Kakashi in the story. He's one of my favorites.

As far as constructive criticism, I can only site some grammatical issues, as well as several, consistent tense issues with verbs. Plot-wise, the story was both sound and entertaining, though I think that the issue with the Hot Spring country could have been expanded upon a little more, since the resolution was rather quick and somewhat unbelievable. Of course, such resolutions are not uncommon in the Naruto universe, so it was not entirely out of place in a Naruto fanfic.

Anyway, I look forward to reading any other stories that you might write in the future.

Oh snap.

Hn, I thought Ryo might turn out something like this. Great work, I am really enjoying your story!

Omfg. I LOVED this fanfic, and it's prequel. *_* I almost started to cry at the end. One reason is because the very last paragraph touched me. D Secondly...well, who didn't almost (or even begin to cry...) whenever they knew "OMG. IT'S THE END OF THE WHOLE STORY. NOOOOOOO." -sniff sniff- I'm still close to crying, just thinking about it...

I totally wouldn't mind another story that's like this. ;D I LOVE your writing style, btw. 3 Ily. XD Ja!~

~/Takai-sama\~

Absolutely loved it. This was an incredible journey that leaves the reader with a strong sense of satisfaction. There is no need for more which many others leave, it ended perfectly. Thank you for such an amazing work and I look forward to reading your future stories.

You finished! Congratulations! And with a nice epilogial ending, too.

My favourite line in this chapter: "It'd be unseemly for the future Hokage to walk around with an imprint of your fist on his face."

Minor nitpick: "Sometimes Ryo seem to appear" - seemed.

Thanks for this!

Amazing.

I loved it, you're a fantastic writer.

Thank you for writing such a great story...and I got to read it for free. _

I have no idea why it never occurred to me that they would relocate to Suna. It makes perfect sense.

Ah, and I'm sad to see the story end but it was wonderful and had a rather nice twist at the end too. So, great story.

upset that it was the end already but nonetheless a very good ending. I like happy endings.

it was great story from beginning to end. hope you'll have more fantastic works out! can't wait!

Awesome like rawsome!

Looooved the whole plot and the ending was perfect:) very well written!

No no no no no! This can't be the last chapter! - pouts -

Lol Great story, i loved each chapter. Keep ip the good work and good luck on te next story!

- wolfy-chan -

Thank you so much for the wonderful story. It was beautifully written and has such a beautiful story line. This fiction is a work of art and I pray that you continue to write and inspire others to get lost in the wonder of your writing. Thanks again!

Love,

KagomaruLover88

Lovely. Thank you for writing this. As usual, the dynamic between all the characters (particularly Sakura and Itachi) is great. And the plot was really good too. I didn't see Suna coming, honestly. And the time skip was a nice touch. Made the story feel complete. Very, very well done.