Reviews for The Return of the Heir
JustALittleTwisted chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
Oh no, now what am I going to read? Lol

This has been such a great story, I've truly enjoyed reading this.
xStarryyAngellx chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
IT IS NOW COMPLETE :O :D (oh btw, this is CrAzYaNiMeFrEaKgUrL, i changed my name xD) hehe, you should make an epilogue... of the futureeeee! like like, when sakura is pregnant and then gives birth lol :D. itd be nice.
Shardaen chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
D'AWWW

the end was so fluffyyyy and so cutee

i'm glad that there was a positive and good ending to the problem with yugakure...but i still think that shiraishi is a bit silly, he could have just asked. o.O

silly boy.

i'm not surprised that Ryo was able to advance so quickly, considering who his father is :)

i'm so happy that the end is here, not because i wanted it to end but so that we could finally know what happened to them :)

yayyy

congrats on finishing!
minniemousemom chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
What an excellent ending to a wonderful story~ they each got what they wanted!
Itaweasel-hime chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
This was absolutely beautiful. Teehee, and Itachi wants more Uchiha babies. :)
Inuyashalover8706 chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
Yet again another wonderful end to a story. I cant wait for the next one.
Lila Priceless chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
Congratulations on the new family member. Thank you for making the time to complete this. I've enjoyed this story and its prequel (as well as your other stories).

I hope things continue to go well for you and you are able to find a happy balance between life and fanfiction for us greedy grateful readers. Thanks again.
anonymous chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
I enjoyed your story. Despite the fact that I am not a Sakura or Itachi fan. A little corny at the end, but it worked.
Annalelle chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
That was a great ending. I expected Sakura to stay in Konoha, but the reasons you gave certainly made sense. I love how well each of the leaders get along with each other. It really shows how strong the alliance is. Congratulations on a great completed story. :)
laydee kai chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
I am so sad to see this story end! I loved it! I was excited when I got the email saying it had been updated!

Awesome job on this one! :) can't wait for your next story, whatever it may be!
Aelibia chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
OMG YAY. I'm so glad you managed to update quickly; I was on pins and needles for this to be finished (and I'm sure you were, too). Thank you so much for sharing this with the internet, and I wish you luck with your fandom endeavors in the future!
Blueberry Babe chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
Thanks so much for an awesome story. well done.
Demidia chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
What a wonderful ending! I love thus story, and I am so happy you ended it this way! Great job!
La Nuit Noire chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
That was a nice ending, great job :) I've been following this tale since the beginning of The Lost One, and it's truly been a pleasure to read. Congratulations on its finish!
DOOOOD chapter 16 . 8/22/2011
Honestly, I didn't like the ending. It was toooo rushed. You should have played a little with Sakura's decision. And I don't think the time ship was necessary.
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