Reviews for The Return of the Heir |
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![]() ![]() Hello, hello hello. I didnt bother leaving a review every chanpter as i was too into the story so ill leave a huge massive one here. I read the prequel and i loved it. What i love most about your series is that unlike actual naruto, you make sakura into a real heroine who can kick ass and all that. Love it. Can i just say how flawless and selfless of a character itachi is?you portray him just how i would imagine him to be, be it six years without sakura not giving away the truth about him or how he acts towards his son. Perfect, flawless character. Now, i was annoyed at some points. Im sure i screamed aloud every couple of chapters with frustration. Ive stuck with you as a reader, but i got some pretty bad heartache from you. Like, all of this uncertainty and keeping the reader knowing and aware...i just wished for some goddamn well earned fluff. If anyone deserved some cheese it was sakura and itachi after all they went through. Just, great plot asside, gimme more of them just interracting and being together. I think youve done it very very wrll, a believable story that makes sence when you think about it. Ryo also, what a cute character. I would argue sakura would have held it quiet from itachi for all that time though, it kinda goes against her true character. Anyway, im now away to raid the rest of your fanfics, the ones i havent already read. Im so itachi-sakura deprived. If youre reading this, youre amazing and youre making this ones humans life, somewhere far far away from you a lot easier. Thank you for your writing. Please finish off the akatsuki one if you can, i loved that one! Or just write more, this is good. Have a nice day! Madzia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Loved it!... was not into itasaku stories but yours is by far the best i have read! Thank you for completing it;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want more ItaSaku from you.. really _ i love the way this story warmed every cold aspect of Uchiha's attitude in it's own way in short... i want more of everything in it :v I don't usually give compliments, but god! You deserved it. Great job :* |
![]() ![]() I don't have time to log in; I will for my final review for both stories but I read this on the app and formulated the review before getting WiFi- but can I just say that these two are so clueless it hurts? I was just sitting here as soon as he started getting jealous over Ryo, torn between laughing my ass off and reaching through the screen to give them both a good slap. And besides, it's not just their total cluelessness that makes me adore this story, it's also the fact that The Lost One was beautiful and I stayed up till 1am finishing it, and this one is just as amazing even though its only 8pm...maybe I'll finish in time to not have to sacrifice my sleep! Plus, the Aoi/ANBU murder thing does give the story a little more plot and context. So thank you for upping my official list of Itachi stories that I genuinely like. (Yes, there is a list. There's that few of them.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this story and The Lost One. I live the thought and depth you give your stories. Ryo was a brilliant character. I would love to see some more fluff scenes of them altogether :D Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely story! Thank you so much for it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think this was complete the last time I read it. So glad I came back to it! Great fic, and I enjoyed it immensely. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Including the prequel this is the best itasaku fanfic I have ever read. Wow, just wow! |
![]() ![]() Ouh... Thats so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is soooo great,great sequel! please continue making more stories you're awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your prequel and I'm really excited to read this story! The only issue I have is that it sounds like Itachi has been looking for Sakura even though you ended the last story with Itachi believing her to be dead. I was excited to see his reaction when he saw she was actually alive but it sound like there is a disconnect between your stories. Which I've done before so I'm not going to hassle you too much about. Great job! |
![]() ![]() Beautiful ending. Nice work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So did Ryo or did Ryo not make ANBU captain at 13! I NEED to know D: |
![]() ![]() Cute ending, light and fun, just what the dr ordered so thanks for sharing it! I loved the different setting compared to your other stories, yet another facet of ita-saku, with just the right balance of angst, fluff, moody uchiha and feisty sakura. Love that I was right about ryo too, who am I kidding, once this crazy little thought crossed my mind, I wanted to see it happen! :) And I just realized I think I went through all your ita-saku stories but one perhaps so I'll get on with it ;) |