Reviews for The Return of the Heir
NovelistDienne chapter 16 . 1/11/2015
TTTTTT_TTTTTT BEAUTIFUL.
NovelistDienne chapter 12 . 1/11/2015
YEEEESS! THE TRUTH FINALLY COMES OUT!
NovelistDienne chapter 10 . 1/10/2015
This was sort of felt like the Maury Show. Itachi needs to stop jumping to conclusions and Sakura needs to stop being stubborn.
Pikas chapter 16 . 1/3/2015
Aaaaaah. This gave me so many feels, from the beginning to the start.

You would think that there was more to Shiraishi and Yugakure, but it simply turned out that he wanted the Shinju to rule over again. Aha. But all is well.

Ryo is such a cutie pie! Ugh. He should get together with Akari. They and Minato can make the next trio.

Thanks for writing such lovely stories, as always!
NovelistDienne chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
OMG I'M SOOOI FREAKING EXCITED!
imaockat chapter 11 . 11/27/2014
This used to be good when I read it a few years ago, now I skip most scenes with Sakura's immaturity. She seems more mature in the prequel.
This Username Is Classified chapter 16 . 11/18/2014
It's was such a lovely story about trust, friendships and family. :') So touching, too. Hope you write more ItaSaku stories, maybe!
Kitty283 chapter 16 . 8/14/2014
Wow great story thank you so much for writing it. It was very interesting and absolutely lovely to read. It makes it very clear that people should always trust their partner and good communication is important. :P poor Itachi and Sakura had to learn it the hard way.
CaramelSwirl123 chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
HOLY CRAP! noooooo... wow... poor Sakura...
schadenfreude chapter 16 . 8/1/2014
I thought i read all the good ones here in ffn. But dang was i wrong! Great job on both fics - the lost one and the return of the heir. Kudos on your passion being a writer as there are others whose stories show great potential but are being abandoned. Such waste yeah?! As to us who, without writing prowess such as yours, are dependent on your writing abilities hope that you could come up with more stories. I hope you know how you make a difference in our lives. You make us feel better. Great stories such as this gives us an escape every now and then from the harsh reality called life. Thank you!

Haha i would have given feedback on what happend in the story/ies but i dont want this comment to become a spoiler. (Unlike what others do.. ahemm) so lemme just say thanks again for finishing this story. Enough fluff, action, death & drama, and of course, love. :)
Guest chapter 16 . 6/10/2014
Clever title. Seemed so obvious what it meant at first, but you were obviously looking underneath the underneath!
Guest chapter 16 . 5/26/2014
I loved it. This story is beautiful. The narrative style is great . You have a brilliant grasp of focalisation. The characterisation of Ryo is adorable. There are few grammatical mistakes, though. It would be nice if you could attend to those. Thank you so much for writing this story. :D
Guest chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
You killed Sasuke! And not just that, you made Danzo kill Sasuke! How can you do this? This outrageously blatant disregard for his emotions. He wanted to kill Danzo for God's sake. On the contrary, he was executed?! Really! You are one cold-blooded, heartless...writer. :( Abuses are not enough to explain my anger and dejection right now.
EndlessBlossom chapter 16 . 5/13/2014
Lovely!
Th3redjumpsuits chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
Hehe, uh oh!
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