Reviews for A Day on the Island of Angels
The Bad Singer chapter 1 . 2/21/2018
Okay, these guys are waaaaayyyyy too self aware! I’m now afraid that I’ll end up with a goofy smile on my face randomly whenever I think of this story.
FawfulInsano chapter 1 . 12/13/2011 looking at this story, I now see the true light about the Sonic universe.

The clouds are Jerks with a Heart of Gold,

Knuckles actually has FINGERS,

Sonic is aware of Fanfiction and the horrors of it.

And for you, The Fourth Wall is subject to Breaking, Medium Awareness, and abuse in general.

All while being ridiculously hilarious at the same time.

Also, why was Sonic helping Rouge in the first place?
iheartdonuts chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Lmao. It's so hard to find humorous Sonic-oneshots these days, luckily enough I found this one. Knuckles is one of my all-time favorite Sonic characters; he's pretty funny when he's clueless - and you wrote him down beautifully in character!

I can totally see Sonic doing something like this btw, maybe not helping Rouge out, but just for his entertainment from boredom. 'When's he's not saving the world; he's past time is fooling a knucklehead.' XD At first, I was thinking Sonic was a bit OC, but then it all made sense at the end. Nice job.
nemiah chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
yay, the fourth wall's finally been torn down, smashed to smithereens and used as cement to thicken the three remaining ones!

this story is freaking awesome. i loved it!
Gladius Infractus chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
OK I'm taking the hint and reviewing XD.

That was AWESOME! Had me laughing my head off the entire way through! Hm, I think we're gonna need some duct tape, 'cause the fourth wall isn't looking to good right now! Actually, I didn't even notice any grammar, punctuation, etc mistakes at all! That doesn't happen often here, seeing as this is a site open to the public, and I have a really good eye for noticing those things. (Except in my own stories it seems... :()

Oh! Hey,guess what! If you hurry you could be the first reviewer on my rewrite of The Maze of Time! (Right back at cha there, Unknownlight. XD)
cat2772 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
XD Wow. That was so hilarious. I'm serious, I haven't laughed out loud at a story for ages.

Brilliant work, thanks for the laugh )
Samara chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
English teachers would kill for a piece of writing like this.

I'm so coming back to read this again!
Starlightlovesya123 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009

Honestly, what am I supposed to say? XD

It was hysterical, for one, and brilliantly random. You probably break the fourth wall better (and more often) then most other authors I've read, and I've got to say it just makes the story even more funny.

I enjoyed it quite a bit, and I think my favorite part was when Knuckles' face turned "into the physical manifestation of the phrase 'WTF!'" at the mention of Sonuckles. XD

Great work, UL. :D
DemeGeek chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
Nice story! But I have a question... Why did you break the 4th wall?
SkulY2K chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
No, no, NO! This was the most horribly written piece of drek I've ever read, EVER! I don't even know where to begin. You seriously need to improve. Ye GODS!

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

Oh, wait. I'm not THAT guy...

Not much to say other than I liked this. It was pretty funny and I've always love fourth-wall breaking humour.

ADarknessInHeaven chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
All I can say...

is that this is GENIUS!


aka: Sam