|Reviews for My Magelet|
| gypsyprincess94 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Heehee. You should write another chapter! I really liked this!
| questioning my sanity chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Love it so far! Really hope you write more! (Daine & Numair are my fav and there are not enough good stories about them)
| xXxblacklilyxXx chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Because I know you love reviews (doesn't everyone?) then I'll give you one.
This was very well written and very sweet. I love it! *faves*
| solosinger1 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
you should have a sequel about him asking and the wedding and stuff. Very good.
| callmeGreen-Eyes chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
i really liked the ending. it felt amazingly in-character for numair to add that little bit to his own thoughts. well done!
| missgrey137 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
just wanted to let you know that "dock-side whore" comment put me into a fit of giggles, lol.
| Skysong of Tortall chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Great job on this fanfic. It's well-written and nicely paced. My only suggestion is that Daine could be written as more mature. To my sensibilities, she came off a little more whiney than necessary. Even though Daine is never one to worry about gossip and whatnot and might challenge Numair on the issue, she always meets his concerns head on as an adult... that's what makes their relationship work. [Remember how direct she is in ROTG, saying something to the effect of 'We're not talking of love? What are we talking of then? Canoodling?'] Her directness opens room for true dialogue, ensuring that neither partner is being manipulated. So it seems to me that it takes her a bit out of character to have her wheedling her way into greater intimacy, and getting away with it because Numair is too tired to really argue with her. In any case, good job on the writing. Your use of dialogue and punctuation is fantastic. Keep up the great work!
| SerenShadow chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Love this! Do you plan to continue it, or is this just a oneshot?
I hope that you continue...I think it would make for a really good fic depending on where you take it, and I am interested!
Please continue! ;)
| Rebekahdarian93 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
OMG! I love it! I know it says complete, but please let there be sequil!
| Eliana chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Very sweet, and they mostly seemed in character. I always assumed they slept together before they got married (in the other sense of the phrase), so Numair's insistance that they wait was a little jarring, but otherwise very nice.
| electricdust chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
I'm so glad you wrote that :) I love the ending.
| omgluvr24 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I love it, even if it is a little out of character, but not really, it just felt a bit forced, what they were saying
| blueflower1594 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
This was terrific! Please update soon! I love seeing Daine torture Numair like that!
| Loten chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Yeah, I'm good like that xD
I like this. No, I'm not just saying it, I really do. It's cute, and I'm a total sucker for fluff, especially with these two. I thought it was pretty realistic, too, you got their attitudes just about right - and Numair calling himself a whore made me laugh out loud, literally! You should definitely keep writing.
| omegaw chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I really like your story and I hope you will write more!