|Reviews for Her Last Ditch Effort|
| sakurayuri89 chapter 7 . 2/14
I really hope shes pregnant after this since bot of them did like bunnies w/o any protection. I loved all your story and hope you finish this story. I will support you from behind!
Maybe if you dont have any muse anymore, you should consider foe adoption. I really like your gakuen alice story, its the best!
| HumpingTeddyBear chapter 7 . 8/3/2013
Don't take this the wrong way, I really like the story, but at the same I kinda don't like it cause of the sex scenes. Especially the last sex scene, cause it seems like he's raping her, and that's just weired for a prospective couple.
But hey I don't know what you've got in mind so plz keep writing, cause I would love to see what happens next.
| SymmetricalGirl8DeathTheKid chapter 7 . 5/12/2013
This is great so please update! :D
| Angel-the-hedge chapter 7 . 4/15/2013
You can send this story to me and I can write it for you. I like writing but i believe I can finish this fanfiction for you
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/4/2013
Update it's really good
| EchiZaki chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
Oh no oh no whats her first job this is sooo hot i love it
| EchiZaki chapter 2 . 12/31/2012
Hahaha natsune got hard cause of mikan ohhh thats soo sexy love it
| EchiZaki chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Mikan is gonna be His maid how fascinating
| kumiko mitarashi chapter 7 . 12/22/2012
Omg what! Yyyyyyyy yyyyyyy...yyyyyyy did you stop omg it was getting good! Man I mad now I was like ohhhh I can't belice u natsume then omg omg that's wut up... All I can say is please please update soon I beg thy
| enzeroo86 chapter 7 . 12/16/2012
Don't give up on you fanfic..
You had a lots of reader here :-)
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/2/2012
Don't let it end like this it great u can make many happens now I'm sad to c such talent leave I like writing n reading story b/c I can make it how i want your just tried of writing good luck just please finish all your story so many can enjoy to the end
| lovely chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
when are u gonna update this? i wanna know what happens in chapter 8 !
| EchizenRyoma chapter 6 . 10/23/2012
so there's no luna in this story. and she's bad. yay!
| EchizenRyoma chapter 7 . 10/23/2012
its not yet done...
| Anime-Angel93 chapter 7 . 9/28/2012